Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Pam Lonsdale
This is perfect for this "tricky" contest! You've used all of the words wisely - nothing seems forced - and it rhymes well.
The picture is also a nice addition to this entry. Good luck, it's probably the best poem I've read for this contest.
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This is perfect for this "tricky" contest! You've used all of the words wisely - nothing seems forced - and it rhymes well.
The picture is also a nice addition to this entry. Good luck, it's probably the best poem I've read for this contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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I so value your validation, Pam. Thank you.