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Heart Crafted Poems - 2022

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Musings of an old man - 2022

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Comment from Tom Horonzy
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A dame whose personage we should miss but won't. To capture a second person with her charm and wit will certainly be challenged but who in the lineage has such characteristics, as she did?

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    Hi Tom thanks!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very interesting and well written Naani poem you have penned in honor of Queen Elizabeth. You used very good descriptive words and very unique imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    Teri, Thanks!
Comment from GWHARGIS
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What a lovely tribute to the queen. I really didn't know much about her but am learning a lot. She seemed like a vibrant personality. Well written and quite enjoyable. Gretchen

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    Gretchen, thank you!
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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Yes, the Queen lived on earth, and now she is with her Phillip. And they will continue to live in our hearts and mind. Neither one of them will ever be replaced. Thank you for this tribute. Have a great night and week.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    CAROLYN, THANK YO SO MUCH!
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 20-Sep-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have made excellent use of these few syllables to pay tribute to the unique and grand Queen--mourned now by the WORLD, not just the UK.
Things will never be quite the same, will they?

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    Janice, I have no doubt that the Queen was the last of a legacy of states people will never see again.
Comment from SLMorrical
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A wonderful poem for the contest. I really like it a lot. This poem flows well and is an easy read to follow. I enjoyed reading it. I know I couldn't write a four line poem. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    I am quite honored, thank you!
Comment from Lilly Flowers
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I enjoyed reading this tribute poem about the Queen. What a great image to go with it. I think most politicians could take a lesson from her. She was always professional. Regards, Lilly

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    Lilly, the best of best!
Comment from Janet Foor
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A lovely Naani poem to honor of Her Majesty, Queen Elizabeth. Her long life well lived was an example to us all.
Very nicely done and good luck in the contest.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    Thank you Janet!
Comment from harmony13
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Such a lovely tribute for Queen Elizabeth! The author's words leave
one with a beautiful message and example that the Queen gave us. The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and goes well
with these words. Great Poem!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    harmony, thank you!
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem follows the form well. It is a terse ode to the Queen, who recently died. I like how you used the King card to show the future.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 20-Sep-2022
    Thank you Joan!
reply by dragonpoet on 20-Sep-2022
    My pleasure.

    Joan