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My Son, My Angel

My angel gave me something to care for

49 total reviews 
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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Thank you for this post. You wrote a great piece. Many emotions came over me as I read and felt your pain. And that cat was an angel from God. Thankfully, that cat intervened, your son is in heaven watching over you. Good Luck and God Bless you.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Thank you. Yes, I often wonder how that kitten happened to be in that place at that exact time. It was the middle of nowhere and I never saw any adult cats in that area.
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 18-Feb-2022
    That was an Angel, I just finished my manuscript, and there is a story about a cat. The night before my infant sister died, a white cat came into my bedroom. The next morning, she had died during the night. So, I believe in angels.
Comment from MissMerri
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I can't imagine a more beautiful way to tell this sad story than the way you have done it. Every word is important and meaningful, and the sequence, even the flashbacks, perfectly arranged and ideally suited to stir the emotions of the reader. This was a sad, yet beautiful story. I'm so glad you listened to the still, small voice. Good for you!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Thank you. It was the saddest event in my life. I lost a child before Roy, and that was bad, but this almost killed me. The kitten did save my life and she lived with me for over twenty years until she passed away. Thanks for the six stars and kind thoughts. Hugs to you.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Thank you for sharing this story. It must have been devastating to lose your son like that, but I am glad that the kitten intervened and changed your mind about taking your own life. God has a purpose for each one of us and our time is in His hands.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Thank you. I think you are right, it wasn't my time yet even if i wanted to go. What were the odds of a kitten being in that place at that exact time? I have thought of this a lot over the years.
reply by Anne Johnston on 18-Feb-2022
    You are welcome. God had His hand on you
Comment from Raul1
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I have enjoyed reading your story. It is clear and concise. The story meets the requirements for the contest. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Thank you for reading and commenting on the story.
reply by Raul1 on 18-Feb-2022
    Welcome!
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
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I have been where you were, and can attest to the validity of your description of the experience. The kitten was, not doubt, there for a reason and it is a god thing that he was. The writing is heartfelt and heart .

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Thank you for reading and commenting. Yes, what are the odds that a kitten, a weak kitten, would have been in that exact spot a that prcise time? It had to be divine intervention.
reply by NANCY V. FORREST on 18-Feb-2022
    :-)
Comment from Shirley McLain
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What a heart wrenching story you wrote. I'm so sorry you lost your son. I can't even begin to know how bad that would be. You did a great job, and I especially liked that your son saved you with the kitten. Have a blessed evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Thank you for reading and commenting. That tiny bit of life definitely saved mine. She needed me so I had to stay. Roy would have known I couldn't abandon a kitten. He loved cats as much as I do.
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Wow, this is a great story for this contest. I think it will do very well, good luck. I personally don't know about Angels, but I have heard from others like you who believe. I am glad that little cat showed up for whatever reason. Very well-done.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
    Thank you for reading and the six stars. What were the odds that a tiny, nearly dead kitten, would be in that exact place at that precise time? I have thought about this a lot over the years.
Comment from Tpa
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Your story was wonderful, but sad. I can not imagine the grief of losing a child, losing a loved one is tragic enough. Although, grieving never ends, the outcome of your tale reveals that someone beyond this Universe is watching over you. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thank you. It was so long ago I have learned to live with it as best I can.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I believe it was your son's doing, or your guardian angel doing it for Roy. We don't understand everything that is between the life and death of us mortals. That the little kitten was like Roy's Iggy, tells me he wanted you to live. The pain of loss will never completely go, but you know he is in good hands, and so is this little kitty who needed you. This is a lovely story, and I am very sorry for your tragic loss. Warm hugs, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thank you. Yes, it was hard to explain the feeling. What are the odds that the kitten would be in that exact place at that exact time? I have thought about it a lot over the years. The kitten was with me for over twenty years.
Comment from Cristine22
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This is really beautiful. It's so wonderful to think that our loved ones who have passed on are still around, that your son saved/helped you that day. I'm happy you're still around and that you got to have that experience at what must have been such a difficult time. Thank you so much for sharing this.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2022


reply by the author on 17-Feb-2022
    Thank you. I'm happy to still be here so I can tell this story. What amazed me the most was how that kitten happened to be in that precise place at that exact time.