Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am a huge fan of sonnets and this sonnet certainly did not disappoint me. It was beautifully written about battling the high seas. Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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I am a huge fan of sonnets and this sonnet certainly did not disappoint me. It was beautifully written about battling the high seas. Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Barbara, thank you so much! Sonnets are very new to me so your words are quite impactful and confidence-building!
Comment from Carlos' girl
Love it. What a terrific poem, perfect sonnet and use of the word "frump" is spectacular. Very good ending as well. Thank you for sharing this wonderful sonnet
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Love it. What a terrific poem, perfect sonnet and use of the word "frump" is spectacular. Very good ending as well. Thank you for sharing this wonderful sonnet
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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I am eternally grateful for your validation of this poem, thank you for these six stars!
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You are most welcome
Comment from Versch
This is a beautifully written Sonnet about a sailor in distress. Fantastic rhymes that follow abbaabba pattern. I think I could never write this kind of poetry. You really did an excellent job here. Well done!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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This is a beautifully written Sonnet about a sailor in distress. Fantastic rhymes that follow abbaabba pattern. I think I could never write this kind of poetry. You really did an excellent job here. Well done!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Oh My! Wow-what a great gift you provided this writer, thank you!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent well written poem indeed my friend! Your eloquent words flow nicely together throughout the piece and didn't seem to be forced at all;-)
Thanks so much for sharing and may God bless you and your family!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Excellent well written poem indeed my friend! Your eloquent words flow nicely together throughout the piece and didn't seem to be forced at all;-)
Thanks so much for sharing and may God bless you and your family!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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I am grateful, thanl you so much!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello JLR, a merry Monday to you. I hope this finds you well. Since I joined this site, I have been exposed to so many different forms of poetry, and here is another style being introduced to me. Thanks for showing me something new today, I enjoy learning. Good job and have a great day!
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Hello JLR, a merry Monday to you. I hope this finds you well. Since I joined this site, I have been exposed to so many different forms of poetry, and here is another style being introduced to me. Thanks for showing me something new today, I enjoy learning. Good job and have a great day!
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank you friend, please note the change intended -- the proper formatting needed adjusted into an octave and seset stanzic flow, may your week be all that you want it to be!
Comment from dragonpoet
JLRThis poem has strong imagery of a shipreck in a storm. It uses sound well to as an extention of the theme and personification. I like the prayer of thanks at the end for the gift of life.
Though the rules say this form should be written in tow stanzas, one eight line stanza(octave) and one six line stanza(sestet). not 2 quatrains and 3 tersets.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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JLRThis poem has strong imagery of a shipreck in a storm. It uses sound well to as an extention of the theme and personification. I like the prayer of thanks at the end for the gift of life.
Though the rules say this form should be written in tow stanzas, one eight line stanza(octave) and one six line stanza(sestet). not 2 quatrains and 3 tersets.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Joan, oops while that was my intention, of course, I am pleased you caught this oversight, now corrected!
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You're welcome, JLR.
Joan