The Persnickety Pooch
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile and dog owners can't budge without their dogs and some posh places ban them! Your photo is gorgeous, at least the dog blends in with your white furniture, I hope he doesn't have muddy paws! A fine write Sally, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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This made me smile and dog owners can't budge without their dogs and some posh places ban them! Your photo is gorgeous, at least the dog blends in with your white furniture, I hope he doesn't have muddy paws! A fine write Sally, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review of my poem, dear Dolly. As always, it is most appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Very amusing--my daughter's first concern is whether the hotel will accept pets--if not, she ain't gonna stay there! Whimsical piece--good choice of posh!
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Very amusing--my daughter's first concern is whether the hotel will accept pets--if not, she ain't gonna stay there! Whimsical piece--good choice of posh!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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We live in a city where outdoor dining and hotels accommodates the pooches. Doggie day spa? Yep, we have them. I can understand the problems of finding a place that's budget-friendly though. My husband and I are the grandparents and dog-friendly. Thank you for the kind review, dear Liz.
Blessings always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from Boogienights
Sounds like a great place for a dog to be! Really all dogs need is food, water and most of all love. This dog knew what was up. A great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Sounds like a great place for a dog to be! Really all dogs need is food, water and most of all love. This dog knew what was up. A great contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review of my poem. So glad you enjoyed it. Sending along my very best, Sally XOs..
Comment from Ric Myworld
What a sweet picture of such a lovely little girl and white-haired pooch. A poem and print combination to make us all smile. Thanks for sharing another enjoyable post.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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What a sweet picture of such a lovely little girl and white-haired pooch. A poem and print combination to make us all smile. Thanks for sharing another enjoyable post.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much. Sending along my best for the day, Sally XOs...
Comment from palmart
Nice three line poem! It can be considered the first poem for both humans and dogs (The Beatles have recorded a song for both of them called "A day in the Life". But yours will be a Poem, that asks for goods to be "Dog Friendly".
Have a Wonderful Easter time, Sally!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y9hu_DA-I5s
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Nice three line poem! It can be considered the first poem for both humans and dogs (The Beatles have recorded a song for both of them called "A day in the Life". But yours will be a Poem, that asks for goods to be "Dog Friendly".
Have a Wonderful Easter time, Sally!!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y9hu_DA-I5s
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and for the link. It is most appreciated. Have a blessed week, Sally XOs...
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You`re very welcome, Dear Sally!!!
Have a Great and Wonderful Easter Time!
Comment from Leann DS
Well done! I can see your pup's eyes darting around the room as I read. :-) I love the picture your poem creates in my mind, and of course, your poem has excellent rhythm. I'm still trying to figure this part out In my own writing. Thank you for sharing. Hugs.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Well done! I can see your pup's eyes darting around the room as I read. :-) I love the picture your poem creates in my mind, and of course, your poem has excellent rhythm. I'm still trying to figure this part out In my own writing. Thank you for sharing. Hugs.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review and kind compliments. So glad you enjoyed it. I'm really enjoying these 575 poetry offerings. They seem to be my thing lately.
Sending along my very best, dear Leann,
Sally XOs...
Comment from Susan Newell
Who can resist a cuddly pooch who scopes out the terrain? I like the word posh, because it evokes plush as well -- soft, cozy and welcoming. The only question I have is about the last line. With all the caps it reads like a "rental wanted" ad. I'd like to think it is the pooch's thought, in which case I would lower case all but M in the last line.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Who can resist a cuddly pooch who scopes out the terrain? I like the word posh, because it evokes plush as well -- soft, cozy and welcoming. The only question I have is about the last line. With all the caps it reads like a "rental wanted" ad. I'd like to think it is the pooch's thought, in which case I would lower case all but M in the last line.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments. Yes, I meant the last line to read like an ad. It's very big down here. I was a Realtor for many years and the MLS oftentimes had this in the notes for pet-loving renters.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
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Got it!
Comment from Sharon Davis
A succinct summary of a dog's perspective of being well received, despite the fancy surroundings. The clear connection between the child and the animal is obvious. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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A succinct summary of a dog's perspective of being well received, despite the fancy surroundings. The clear connection between the child and the animal is obvious. Well done.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review of my short verse poem, dear Sharon. It is most appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Sally, this is a good 5/7/5 written true to form and you write about one great fuss-pot of a pooch. Good use of the word 'surveil' - new to the language and suits your poem well. Good use of alliteration in persnickety pooch. Hope it does well in the contest. Good luck - regards Dorothy xx
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Hello Sally, this is a good 5/7/5 written true to form and you write about one great fuss-pot of a pooch. Good use of the word 'surveil' - new to the language and suits your poem well. Good use of alliteration in persnickety pooch. Hope it does well in the contest. Good luck - regards Dorothy xx
Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and kind of compliments, dear Dorothy. I'm glad you like the poem and pooch. Sending you my best today o.
Sal XOs....
Comment from Judy Lawless
What a sweet picture, Sally, and you've managed to capture the perfect scenario to describe it in these three lines of poetry. "Must be dog friendly!" Love it. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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What a sweet picture, Sally, and you've managed to capture the perfect scenario to describe it in these three lines of poetry. "Must be dog friendly!" Love it. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. It is greatly appreciated. Sal XOs...