Heaven on Earth
a contest entry35 total reviews
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is an amazing poem. I really enjoyed reading this. As I went along, it just kept getting better and better. I didn't want it to end. The beauty that you showed and the joy that you portrayed made me feel so good inside. I had a smile on my face through the whole reading. It was masterfully penned. Well done. -January L.
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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This is an amazing poem. I really enjoyed reading this. As I went along, it just kept getting better and better. I didn't want it to end. The beauty that you showed and the joy that you portrayed made me feel so good inside. I had a smile on my face through the whole reading. It was masterfully penned. Well done. -January L.
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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January,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay safe and well.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Patty Palmer
Do I hear an eight? The longer I know you, the more you amaze me with your talent. The feelings you feel and are able to put down on paper (or pure white computer screen) This is such a beautiful glimpse of Heaven that it brought me to tears!! A beautiful poem written by a sister in the Lord!
Love ya!
Patty
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Do I hear an eight? The longer I know you, the more you amaze me with your talent. The feelings you feel and are able to put down on paper (or pure white computer screen) This is such a beautiful glimpse of Heaven that it brought me to tears!! A beautiful poem written by a sister in the Lord!
Love ya!
Patty
Comment Written 27-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Patty,
You are a sweetheart, I am always blessed by your kindness.
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six star rating and very kind comments that brought me to tears. I love you my sweet and dear friend.
I love you much!!!
Hugs...Portia
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You are more than welcome! That was one of the most beautiful poem I've ever heard or read! :Love you too my friend! Patty
Comment from Drew Delaney
An excellent entry, Portia! You describe heaven so well. You have written each line according to scripture which is so very good! We would not know without it being foretold. Take care my writing friend. Best wishes in the contest!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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An excellent entry, Portia! You describe heaven so well. You have written each line according to scripture which is so very good! We would not know without it being foretold. Take care my writing friend. Best wishes in the contest!
Drew xx
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Hello Drew,
I pray you and your family are doing well. I love the beautiful photo.
Thanks so much for your review, very kind comments and best wishes, they are greatly appreciated. Stay safe and well, take care of the beautiful baby!!!
Hugs...Portia
Comment from royowen
This is a beautifully written poem and dedicated to that wonderful when all His saints will gather to worship God on His great white throne, the elders throwing their crowns before Him, seeing Him the way He ism and easing ourselves as He sees us, holy and chaste. Well done, Portia, beautifully written in immaculate verse, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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This is a beautifully written poem and dedicated to that wonderful when all His saints will gather to worship God on His great white throne, the elders throwing their crowns before Him, seeing Him the way He ism and easing ourselves as He sees us, holy and chaste. Well done, Portia, beautifully written in immaculate verse, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Roy,
Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...Portia
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Most welcome
Comment from clsandau
What a beautiful poem you have penned. Wonderfully smooth, great rhyming and well put together. You do make Heaven sound like a wonderful place to be. Hopefully we will be there one day and that is as you describe. I believe that way too. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest - a great entry for sure. Blessings, Carol
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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What a beautiful poem you have penned. Wonderfully smooth, great rhyming and well put together. You do make Heaven sound like a wonderful place to be. Hopefully we will be there one day and that is as you describe. I believe that way too. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest - a great entry for sure. Blessings, Carol
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 27-May-2020
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Stay safe and well.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Wow! This is beautiful. You've exceptionally executed within the laid out rules for the contest. My very best wishes at that. More ink to your pen; more grace to your heart.
Cheers and many kudos!
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Wow! This is beautiful. You've exceptionally executed within the laid out rules for the contest. My very best wishes at that. More ink to your pen; more grace to your heart.
Cheers and many kudos!
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Precious,
Your very kind comments, touched my heart and made my day. Thanks so much for such an outstanding review and six star rating, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful day, stay safe and well.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your glimpse of heaven is unifying the heaven and earth under the new Jerusalem. You are playing with very powerful biblical concepts, but from all of this I feel the wish to reach harmony. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Your glimpse of heaven is unifying the heaven and earth under the new Jerusalem. You are playing with very powerful biblical concepts, but from all of this I feel the wish to reach harmony. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Iza,
Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful week and stay safe.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is superb in every respect. It is beautiful and vividly descriptive of what will and will not be awaiting us in Heaven. For example: No POLITICS and bias--so right! Your poem conveys a powerful and glorious message.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Your poem is superb in every respect. It is beautiful and vividly descriptive of what will and will not be awaiting us in Heaven. For example: No POLITICS and bias--so right! Your poem conveys a powerful and glorious message.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Janice,
Thanks so much for such an outstanding review, six star rating and very kind comments. Have a great week and stat safe.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a glimpse of heaven, you describe it beautifully and clear. Most of us cannot wait to enter those gates where there will be no more pain or sorrows we have to bear.
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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A very well-written poem about a glimpse of heaven, you describe it beautifully and clear. Most of us cannot wait to enter those gates where there will be no more pain or sorrows we have to bear.
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Sandra,
Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful week and stay safe.
Blessings...Portia
Comment from crzypnter
This is a wonderfully crafted poem that speaks to the heart of your faith and that of myself. The image you choose goes hand in hand with your poem. Thank you for sharing. God bless
August
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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This is a wonderfully crafted poem that speaks to the heart of your faith and that of myself. The image you choose goes hand in hand with your poem. Thank you for sharing. God bless
August
Comment Written 26-May-2020
reply by the author on 26-May-2020
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Thanks you kindly for your review and very kind comments, they are greatly appreciated. Have a wonderful week and stay safe.
Blessings...Portia