Og and Ugg ~ Big Love
Epic developments.36 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
The world is small your mind travels the wind and speaks with the ancients, Sally. :) Good story from the past. Yet, I wonder... Are you going to name the babies Oggy and Uggy? :) Thank you for sharing a place and your imagination. Jacob would be happy. :)
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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The world is small your mind travels the wind and speaks with the ancients, Sally. :) Good story from the past. Yet, I wonder... Are you going to name the babies Oggy and Uggy? :) Thank you for sharing a place and your imagination. Jacob would be happy. :)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. I'm so pleased you enjoyed Og and Igg. Sending along my best as a,ways,
Sally xo
Comment from rwilliam
"She-creatures are soft like the petals of a flower. They bruise easily," said the elder. "You have put your hoof into your mouth, as we say among our people." ~ HAHAHA Loved the line, put your hoof into your mouth...So funny and cave man like. Tee hee.
What a fun read! I really like how you wrote the baby delivery scene. Well done! I love it.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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"She-creatures are soft like the petals of a flower. They bruise easily," said the elder. "You have put your hoof into your mouth, as we say among our people." ~ HAHAHA Loved the line, put your hoof into your mouth...So funny and cave man like. Tee hee.
What a fun read! I really like how you wrote the baby delivery scene. Well done! I love it.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and stars. I'm so pleased if it made you smile. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Cindy Warren
Og and Ugg are very fortunate cave people, to have such a big love. Even a caveman needs a little help to deal with a pregnant woman. Glad everything worked out for them.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Og and Ugg are very fortunate cave people, to have such a big love. Even a caveman needs a little help to deal with a pregnant woman. Glad everything worked out for them.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Cindy dear. Your kind review and words are so appreciated and always needed.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoy your writing. It sounds like the he and the she creatures you'e created have some very similar characteristic to the humans. The female of the species is as mysterious and hard to understand has a human would be. She has a soft side and the hormone problem of crying easily. I'm wondering if you are planning to continue this story;
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I enjoy your writing. It sounds like the he and the she creatures you'e created have some very similar characteristic to the humans. The female of the species is as mysterious and hard to understand has a human would be. She has a soft side and the hormone problem of crying easily. I'm wondering if you are planning to continue this story;
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Thank you very much, dear Beth. I appreciate your kind review of Og and Ugg. I had a lot of fun with these two and will continue to do so. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from Sylvia Page
This deserves a six, but alas I have run short. It is a beautiful story of simple cave people and pure love. Now they are both rewarded with a pair of beauties,
A belated happy Valentines!
and best wishes
Sylvia
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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This deserves a six, but alas I have run short. It is a beautiful story of simple cave people and pure love. Now they are both rewarded with a pair of beauties,
A belated happy Valentines!
and best wishes
Sylvia
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much. I'm sorry to be behind. I just got What The Blind Girl Saw to print today. It's been a long month. I'm glad you liked the second story of Og and Ugg. Your kind reviews are so appreciated.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xoxo
Comment from Ulla
Awe, Sally, it's a lovely story and a confirmation how deep a love can run between a man and a woman. And now they are blessed with a girl and a boy. I really enjoyed the read. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Awe, Sally, it's a lovely story and a confirmation how deep a love can run between a man and a woman. And now they are blessed with a girl and a boy. I really enjoyed the read. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Ulla. So sorry to be so late with this. I really appreciate your always kind reviews and encouraging words. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo
Comment from juliaSjames
Your creative imagination brings the reader into a stone age world. Only to discover that human beings haven't really changed over the years.
Beautifully written, Sally.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Your creative imagination brings the reader into a stone age world. Only to discover that human beings haven't really changed over the years.
Beautifully written, Sally.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind compliments of Og and Ugg. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Dear Sally, another good chapter on your story. As I have said before 'it's the you tell 'em'. You do it so well - the measure of a good writer. The little touches like 'she threw her stick' for example - little bits that fill out the story - well done - warm regards Dorothy xxx
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Hello Dear Sally, another good chapter on your story. As I have said before 'it's the you tell 'em'. You do it so well - the measure of a good writer. The little touches like 'she threw her stick' for example - little bits that fill out the story - well done - warm regards Dorothy xxx
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Sorry to be so late. Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. It's is so appreciated.
Sending you my best today as always, Dorothy dear.
Sal xoxo
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
This is a heartwarming story. Og is so helpless but sweet. I loved the dialogue in the story. Your descriptions captured the love between Og and Ugg. I enjoyed this story.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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This is a heartwarming story. Og is so helpless but sweet. I loved the dialogue in the story. Your descriptions captured the love between Og and Ugg. I enjoyed this story.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the excellent review of my work. I'm so pleased you enjoyed Og and Ugg. Sending you my best today as always,
Sally xo
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this cute story of Og and Ugg and Og's problem with "hoof in mouth" disease (lol.) I guess he'll go back and pick up the flowers and the fish and cook dinner? It's amazing to think how women gave birth in ancient times and survived!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you for this cute story of Og and Ugg and Og's problem with "hoof in mouth" disease (lol.) I guess he'll go back and pick up the flowers and the fish and cook dinner? It's amazing to think how women gave birth in ancient times and survived!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2020
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Thank you, dear Helen. I'm so pleased you enjoyed Og and Ugg. Your kind reviews mean so much.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo