Life With A Fishmonger
A 50-word relationship.24 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Holy mackerel that's quite an accomplishment to write fifty of these absolutely delightful stories. It's hard enough for me to write one story in only fifty words, let alone fifty and filled with puns too.
So, so very well done, Lisa. This is a book worth publishing in my opinion. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Holy mackerel that's quite an accomplishment to write fifty of these absolutely delightful stories. It's hard enough for me to write one story in only fifty words, let alone fifty and filled with puns too.
So, so very well done, Lisa. This is a book worth publishing in my opinion. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2020
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Now that I've cranked out 50 of these stories, I have a fair idea of what appeals and what is less successful. Compiling a book is a definite future aim.
Comment from Tina Crute
Ok, so here! I knew my favorite one would come up eventually and I would give it a six. I love this. It is witty, creative, intelligent and engaging! All your others are great too, but this is the total package. You effortlessly weave in humorous tricks with words, and it reads so easily! You made me give a six. Well done!
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Ok, so here! I knew my favorite one would come up eventually and I would give it a six. I love this. It is witty, creative, intelligent and engaging! All your others are great too, but this is the total package. You effortlessly weave in humorous tricks with words, and it reads so easily! You made me give a six. Well done!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from Sugarray77
You really did a great job including the different species of fish as your adjectives and verbs. I enjoyed this one about the fishmonger... still smiling. :)
Melissa
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You really did a great job including the different species of fish as your adjectives and verbs. I enjoyed this one about the fishmonger... still smiling. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from Gail Denham
Very well done - nearly every word a play on words. Liked this one. Even the names work. Here you are at 50 - shall you go on? Might as well - there are many more occupations - and don't forget the guys marrying dancers, (maybe you did that one) or marrying women congressmen.
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Very well done - nearly every word a play on words. Liked this one. Even the names work. Here you are at 50 - shall you go on? Might as well - there are many more occupations - and don't forget the guys marrying dancers, (maybe you did that one) or marrying women congressmen.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from Wils
Very cleverly done and thank you for giving me the laugh I needed this morning. Always amazes me how well you write these and this one was no exception.
Geoff
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Very cleverly done and thank you for giving me the laugh I needed this morning. Always amazes me how well you write these and this one was no exception.
Geoff
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from Louise Michelle
My nose twitched when I read this title, thinking of the smell. Well, girl, you did a terrific job with this one. I loved the words floundered and sharkastic - good work. The only problem is I'm feeling a little queasy, thinking of smelly fish. Hugs, Lou
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My nose twitched when I read this title, thinking of the smell. Well, girl, you did a terrific job with this one. I loved the words floundered and sharkastic - good work. The only problem is I'm feeling a little queasy, thinking of smelly fish. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
Every one you write gets better and better. I love the use of the names of different fish in this particular story. "Dory's now in sole charge" broke me up.
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Every one you write gets better and better. I love the use of the names of different fish in this particular story. "Dory's now in sole charge" broke me up.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from Pantygynt
What will I do for my daily giggle now that time appears to have been called on these. This one is a real blast to end with. You have cast your bread upon the waters and it seems that almost all the fish that ever there was came to perch on your float.
Thank you for so much fun.
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What will I do for my daily giggle now that time appears to have been called on these. This one is a real blast to end with. You have cast your bread upon the waters and it seems that almost all the fish that ever there was came to perch on your float.
Thank you for so much fun.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from Sallyo
I think you managed to break your own record for puns in this one. Can someone be married to a pundit, I wonder? Makes one ponder...or punder...on life with a fishmonger
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I think you managed to break your own record for puns in this one. Can someone be married to a pundit, I wonder? Makes one ponder...or punder...on life with a fishmonger
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Just brilliant Lisa and you nailed this one with your inventive use of words to describe the fishmonger and you cleverly told a fishy story here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Just brilliant Lisa and you nailed this one with your inventive use of words to describe the fishmonger and you cleverly told a fishy story here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2020