Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Bill, This is a very nice and well written 2-4-2 poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very neat imagery from the picture you shared. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019

Thanks, Teri

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you deliver a technically sound 2-4-2 with correct line and syllable count throughout. The content is thought provoking and conjures a poignant image. Good luck in the judging and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019

Thanks, MA

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Hi Bill, I guess you can't get any blacker than the human black hole! lol. And it works well with this. A back hole in Space does chew up and destroy all that passes through it. I thought this was a great play on words and an excellent contest entry. Well done and good luck! Sandra xxx

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019

Thank you, Sandra.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 2-4-2 Poetry contest.
Your short verse is a very good description of a black hole.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2019

Thank you, Sharon