Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Sir Issac Newton had a similar experience with far different results. He became a famous mathematician credited with discovering gravity. How did we manage to stay down before him?

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

At least we didn?t fall for everything.

Comment from patsolstad

Excellent

This is adorable! I've never seen this form before...maybe you've created a completely new way to write a poem. And you got a marvelous pun out of it.
Excellent work!

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

Thanks, Patsolstad

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Fun and clever little poem about the apple that apple-o-gized. You come up with some interesting word plays, Bill. Good rhyming and presentation of the apple. Marilyn

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

Thanks, Marilyn.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Love it! And you probably didn't know that your pun works even better in Korean. The word for apple is 'sah-gwa' and it's also the word for 'apology' so your poem was even funnier to me.

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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018

They must have some sorry apples in Korea. : )