Wally Weasel's Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "Wally's Back Home"He's not choosy about what he paints.
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Comment from William Ross
hahaha love the wally poems, glad he's back from his teaching class. has great rhyme with a good meter, witty and fun, can't wait to hear what wally has to say about his trip. Thanks for the share and have a great day
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016
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hahaha love the wally poems, glad he's back from his teaching class. has great rhyme with a good meter, witty and fun, can't wait to hear what wally has to say about his trip. Thanks for the share and have a great day
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016
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I'm so glad to hear you say you're glad he's back. I thought about retiring him. But he gets good responses.
Thank you for such a nice review. 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. Wally was missed, and I am glad he's back. When we have talents we must share it with others as well. We can teach others also our talents.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016
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A very well-written poem. Wally was missed, and I am glad he's back. When we have talents we must share it with others as well. We can teach others also our talents.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2016
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Thank you for saying that. I almost retired him. I thought maybe he was getting tiresome. I appreciate your comments so very much. Thank you.
Yvonne
Comment from joannakruk
Hehe how cute, I understand that Wally is your cartoon double, his adventures actually yours. There is nothing more satisfying than sharing knowledge with the young and observing as they adapt your style to their own.What a fantastic journey for Wally. Superb rhyme.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Hehe how cute, I understand that Wally is your cartoon double, his adventures actually yours. There is nothing more satisfying than sharing knowledge with the young and observing as they adapt your style to their own.What a fantastic journey for Wally. Superb rhyme.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much. Wally's quite a little boy. He has more endeavours he was to pursue.
I truly appreciate your review. 8-)
Comment from Dean Kuch
There's an Institute of Weasel Artists, Yvonne? Geesh, I had no idea, lol...
"He sat the easel up and painted swishes here and there.
The little weasels were amazed, could only sit and stare." ... I used to watch Bob Ross on the Public Broadcasting System who had the same sort of effect on me.
That guy was truly amazing! ...
"When Wally checked what they had done,
he saw with great delight
the little ones had painted well.
One did a bright red kite.
Some had painted trees and clouds, and nine did flow'ring plants,
and bumblebees and butterflies, and one pink tiny ant." ... You mean to tell me that at of all those young weasels, not one painted a monster?
Boy, times sure have changed since I was a wee weasel, heh-heh...
This was awesome, as always, Yvonne; from the first line to the very last.
'Welcome back, Wally!"
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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There's an Institute of Weasel Artists, Yvonne? Geesh, I had no idea, lol...
"He sat the easel up and painted swishes here and there.
The little weasels were amazed, could only sit and stare." ... I used to watch Bob Ross on the Public Broadcasting System who had the same sort of effect on me.
That guy was truly amazing! ...
"When Wally checked what they had done,
he saw with great delight
the little ones had painted well.
One did a bright red kite.
Some had painted trees and clouds, and nine did flow'ring plants,
and bumblebees and butterflies, and one pink tiny ant." ... You mean to tell me that at of all those young weasels, not one painted a monster?
Boy, times sure have changed since I was a wee weasel, heh-heh...
This was awesome, as always, Yvonne; from the first line to the very last.
'Welcome back, Wally!"
Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Fancy you liking Wally. I'm flattered.
You always have such cute little figures to add to your reviews. I always enjoy them. 8-)
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I've always liked Wally, Yvonne. It's a perfect series for kids.
Have you ever thought about trying to publish it?
If not, you should.
You're more than welcome.
~Dean :}
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Yes, I have. With one thing and another, I haven't done all my drawings yet. I will publish it with CreateSpace, I think. I have lupus and have been sick a while now, and I have a 95 year old mother to see about. All in all, I've been remiss in getting it finished. I have the lady who helped Douglas Paul with his book, and she'll help me put it together.
Thank you so much for your encouragement and support. I means so much to me. You are a good friend.
Yvonne
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Well, I want a signed copy whenever you do get it published.
I'll read it to my grandkids, when and IF I ever get some, LOL.
Good luck, Yvonne, and I hope your Lupus has improved.
Warmest wishes,
~Dean :}
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You will definitely get one. Thank you for asking. I won't forget. 8-)
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I'll pay for it of course.
You just let me know how much and I'll send you a money order.
I don't use checks, too many thieves out there, lurking about!~Dean
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Don't give it another thought. I will be delighted to make you a gift. No arguments. When the time comes, I'll get your address. Thank you.
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Thank you! :)
Comment from MelB
Hi Yvonne, Yeah! Wally is back. This is another fine children's poem with great aabb rhyme and flow. Love the artwork too!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Hi Yvonne, Yeah! Wally is back. This is another fine children's poem with great aabb rhyme and flow. Love the artwork too!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Thank you so much. I'm happy you think so. 8-)
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You're welcome:)
Comment from Gloria ....
I absolutely adore the artwork. Wally is a fantastic artist.
I think this is a very cool poem. Seriously Tell him the artwork is bang on and definitely straight from the heart.
Love it. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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I absolutely adore the artwork. Wally is a fantastic artist.
I think this is a very cool poem. Seriously Tell him the artwork is bang on and definitely straight from the heart.
Love it. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Awwww, what a sweet review. He'll be glad to hear his hurried drawing was a hit. 8-)
Comment from lyenochka
So cute! Did you do the drawing, too? I love that you use an unusual animal, the weasel which has a bad reputation in English idiom. But I find Wally very likable and kids would like him, too!
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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So cute! Did you do the drawing, too? I love that you use an unusual animal, the weasel which has a bad reputation in English idiom. But I find Wally very likable and kids would like him, too!
Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Thank you. Yes, Wally does his own artwork. LOL.
I'm so happy you like it. He has other stories to tell before this one. 8-)
Comment from AnnaLinda
Wally,
Oh my goodness! This has to be the most adorable poem I have ever read.
Where do I begin? ""Now, see here, class," our Wally said,
"you must paint from your heart." Now, those are wise words.
I can't even select parts I like the most. Each and every line is so cherished
by me and I give Wally a 6 hands down! I missed him so.
Linda
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Wally,
Oh my goodness! This has to be the most adorable poem I have ever read.
Where do I begin? ""Now, see here, class," our Wally said,
"you must paint from your heart." Now, those are wise words.
I can't even select parts I like the most. Each and every line is so cherished
by me and I give Wally a 6 hands down! I missed him so.
Linda
Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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He is one happy little weasel. You have made our day. Thank you so very much. 8-)
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I wouldn't have it any other way!!!!!!!
Comment from Linda Kay
How very imaginative- a Weasel Art Institute. I liked the way the rhyme fell naturally in the story, it was not at all forced, just "painted" the whole cute story.
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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How very imaginative- a Weasel Art Institute. I liked the way the rhyme fell naturally in the story, it was not at all forced, just "painted" the whole cute story.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Thank you for such nice compliments. I'm glad you enjoyed it. 8-)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Adorrrrable poem that kids will love. I like your picture. They aren't wearing their hats because they aren't painting yet, just watching Wally's lesson... Duh! :)
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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Adorrrrable poem that kids will love. I like your picture. They aren't wearing their hats because they aren't painting yet, just watching Wally's lesson... Duh! :)
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2016
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2016
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You're right. They didn't put them on until they started painting. That's my story and I'm sticking to it. Thank you, fellow conspirator. LOL.