Wally Weasel's Stories
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Comment from MizKat
Hi DaMommy,
I just love reading the poems about Wally the Weasel. He does and says so many cute things and I always have to laugh. It always makes me feel so much better and for a few minutes I don't ache as much. Tell Wally I love him!
Kat
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Hi DaMommy,
I just love reading the poems about Wally the Weasel. He does and says so many cute things and I always have to laugh. It always makes me feel so much better and for a few minutes I don't ache as much. Tell Wally I love him!
Kat
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I thank you again for your loyal support. Also, the six stars has really made my day. Thank you so much. 8-)
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You're so welcome, DaMommy. Your poems about Wally are really nice. Kat
Comment from tony bronk
I admire Wally's ambition (blind) and his vision (blind) and his idea that he's "smart".? But, I don't think he's the "brightest bulb" in the pack. Good luck Wally! Be safe! A wonderful story/poem. I always enjoy the thrilling adventures of Wally the Weasel! Tony
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I admire Wally's ambition (blind) and his vision (blind) and his idea that he's "smart".? But, I don't think he's the "brightest bulb" in the pack. Good luck Wally! Be safe! A wonderful story/poem. I always enjoy the thrilling adventures of Wally the Weasel! Tony
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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No, he doesn't think he's especially smart. He is just having fun.
Thank you for enjoying Wally, and for your review. 8-)
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I'm just kidding about the "smart" Can't I have fun? Tony
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Of course, you can. I took it for teasing. 8-)
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I'm happy 'bout that! I really enjoy Wally! So what if he's not Einstein? I'm not either. (laughing) Tony
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Don't tell Wally, but he's not really a good painter, either. LOL
Thanks. I've enjoyed the banter with you. It's fun. 8-)
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Of course, you can. I took it for teasing. 8-)
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Don't tell Wally, but he's not really a good painter, either. LOL
Thanks. I've enjoyed the banter with you. It's fun. 8-)
Comment from Douglas Paul
Oh yes - very good. I love the creativity. The rhyme is good and the tempo is good in this one so it flows well and reads smoothly. This is just delightful, Yvonne
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Oh yes - very good. I love the creativity. The rhyme is good and the tempo is good in this one so it flows well and reads smoothly. This is just delightful, Yvonne
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much for this exceptional review. I appreciate it so much.
Will Badger want to learn to skate? hahahaha
I admit I cracked up myself with the "world's first rolling artist." LOL
Again, thank you. 8-)
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LOL I think we better keep the Badger away from Wally. TheBadger would be a bad influence.
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Nawwww. He's a good boy. Just outspoken. That's all right. LOL
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LOL
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Nawwww. He's a good boy. Just outspoken. That's all right. LOL
Comment from Writer8264
I absolutely loved that! It really teaches young people to never give up trying on something. Question for you: Did you mean to put, "musses up his hair" or "messes up his hair?" If it's "messes" it's only a small and nothing typo and if it's "musses" it's very creative! Great job all around! :)
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I absolutely loved that! It really teaches young people to never give up trying on something. Question for you: Did you mean to put, "musses up his hair" or "messes up his hair?" If it's "messes" it's only a small and nothing typo and if it's "musses" it's very creative! Great job all around! :)
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I meant musses. Thank you for asking, though, because had it been a mistake, you would have caught it for me.
I'm so glad you like Wally and his adventures. 8-)
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You're very welcome :)
Comment from royowen
I just love this well written even metered work, this style reminds of someone who writes in a similar vein. So well done, beautifully rhymed and the language is perfect for this type of kiddy's poem/story, also with the fight amount of mobile anecdote to keep them absorbed and interested, well done, congratulations, blressings, Roy
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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I just love this well written even metered work, this style reminds of someone who writes in a similar vein. So well done, beautifully rhymed and the language is perfect for this type of kiddy's poem/story, also with the fight amount of mobile anecdote to keep them absorbed and interested, well done, congratulations, blressings, Roy
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Thank you for a lovely review. I'm happy to know you like Wally. 8-)
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Most welcome
Comment from John Parkin
Very inspirational and the character is relatable along with the actions you have him portraying. Having raised a few children and now working with Special Needs people I believe it is our job to encourage when there seems to be no light at the end of the tunnel. I have seen so many Wally's stumble and fall and if there was no one there to pick them up they would still be in despair.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Very inspirational and the character is relatable along with the actions you have him portraying. Having raised a few children and now working with Special Needs people I believe it is our job to encourage when there seems to be no light at the end of the tunnel. I have seen so many Wally's stumble and fall and if there was no one there to pick them up they would still be in despair.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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How good of you to be there to help those people. Such a lovely thing to do.
I'm so happy you like Wally and his shenanigans. There's no stopping him. LOL
Again, thank you. 8-)
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You are most welcome.
Comment from William Ross
very good I love these wally the weasles, I hope you have a book going on all these wonderful stories of wally. great job and read fun and witty with great humor. have a wonderful day
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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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very good I love these wally the weasles, I hope you have a book going on all these wonderful stories of wally. great job and read fun and witty with great humor. have a wonderful day
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Comment Written 27-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much. What a lovely review. I'm so glad you like Wally. 8-)
I'm working on a book. Just don't have enough nerve yet.