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Wally Weasel's Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Wally Weasel Loves to Paint"
He's not choosy about what he paints.

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Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
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I really like this, for me, quite humorous poem. Wally having a great time, isn't that what life should be all about? He paints for the joy and happiness it brings to him. Love the artwork of Wally and his pondering of the colors that he may paint with.

Well done my friend.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2016
    Thank you. Wally doesn't care that he's not good. In fact, he thinks he is. But he loves color! He may have to realize someday that he needs to take up another hobby. LOL

    Yes, joy and happiness is what's all about. If it ceases to be fun, then it's time to move on. 8-)
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Yvonne,

I enjoyed reading your lighthearted poem about the weasel artist.
Where is his blue beret? He sounds egotistical, but I'll forgive him
for that...I guess...he's still a weasel at heart.

This is a fun poem and great for kids of all ages.

Linda

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    No, he's not! He's a sweetie. Take that back. LOL
reply by AnnaLinda on 09-Apr-2016
    I thought that's how we got that saying...You know...the old weasel...
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    LOL. You're probably right.
reply by Anonymous Member on 11-Apr-2016
    LOL. You're probably right.
Comment from TAB_that's me
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This is so cute ans so funny. Great rhymes.

I especially liked:

Some paint goes on the canvas, but most of it does not.

Teresa

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    That goes for me, too, when I try to paint walls. Wally and I are a pair. LOL

    Thank you for your review. I'm so glad you thought it was funny. 8-)
Comment from Teri7
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As always this is an adorable job you have done. Wally Weasel is just too cute. he loves to paint himself. My grandson would love to have a book like this read to him. hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thank you. You always make me feel so good. 8-)
Comment from jusylee72
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You did it again another wonderfully, word illustrated character. I truly love Wally and want to meet him. I want to turn the page in a children's book as I read to my grandchildren and see his green studio. What a colorful character.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    What a lovely review you've given me. That's a high compliment, wanting to share with your grandchildren. Thank you! 8-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A great imaginary poem, I can just imagine Wally paints everything in colorful stripes dots and blobs. Most certainly some color will also be on himself too.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Yes, he gets excited when he paints. LOL

    Thank you for your nice comments. I appreciate them so much. 8-)
Comment from J Dan Francis
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This piece is great. It flowed well and rhymed all the way. I am no poetry expert but "Wally Weasel Loves to Paint" made me smile and think that this something I would read to my nieces and nephews. I can see a piece like this in a storybook collection. I definitely would like to see more of Wally Weasel.
Well done!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thank you so much. Thank you so very much for the 6.

    If it made you smile, then I've done my job. 8-)
Comment from William Ross
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A wonderful tail of wally the weasel who loves to paint, Witty and fun would make a great children's story. great job on this and have a great day.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thank you. I always appreciate your reviews. 8-)
Comment from tfawcus
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Sounds like some fun coming up! Loved that description, 'a living breathing rainbow' - I could just imagine it! It brings back memories of my daughter and I rag painting a room once - a process that involved throwing paint-laden towels at the walls. We were both covered, head to toe! We were not popular! The room still looks pretty good though!

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    I can accomplish the same paint-covered state even with a roller. I don't know how that happens.

    Thank you for your lovely review. It warms my heart. Truly. 8-)
Comment from LisaD123
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This has all the ingredients of an excellent children's poem. The language has lots of repetition of sounds which would make the poem fun to be read aloud to a child. There are also lots of action words so the poem could be acted out. An enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Apr-2016


reply by the author on 09-Apr-2016
    Thank you for your lovely review.

    I'm so happy you like it. 8-)