Comment from royowen

Excellent

A very nice poem written in eloquent language, well done with this one, Carolyn, not a bad poem to come back with, I love the descriptive words you have written, I guess it must be a specky place! Well done, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Thank you Roy,
Maureen has the joy of having a cabin on Bon Echo Lake in Canada. She writes of it often. I appreciate your fine comments.
Have a wonderful day, we have a gorgeous morning. I have the door open to the screened porch and have been listening to the
birds sing.
Love, Carolyn

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

This is a lovely poetic description of the lake. I haven't seen the post of Maureen's, but I assume it also mentions the hourglass shape.

Mice alliteration in timeless tango and sensual shape.

Steve

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

The picture of Bon Echo, used in Maureen's poem, appears in my visual mind as an hourglass shape. So glad you enjoyed this one Steve,
;-) Carolyn

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

I had to lower this one so I could not see the illustration. That freed me to create my own visuals from the asymptotic joining of my creative subconscious with the meaning and (my) inferred meaning of your words.

First two lines took me to the year 1953 and the White Mountains of Hew Hampshire, and flume gorge near Mount Liberty.

For some reason, line three gave me a visual + a feel: it was of a river that moved but did not move. Interpretation: the water moved the river shore didn't.

Now skipping on to the end, my reaction was mood dependent, you were waxing beauty and I was after a giggle; and Bon Echo gave me one.

Do you remember the old Volkswagen Scirocco TV add where a Scirocco auto was tooling along in the distance on a mountain road? I came up with a sound-track for it, "Little scirocco haw do you do? hello ... hello ... hello." (echoing all over the place,

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

I love your review. I give it a ******.... Thanks for the wonderful and fun comments.
:-) Carolyn

reply by Pyrrho on 17-Jul-2014

Ha. I wish I could have sold that one to VW.

Thanks for the stars.

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Carolyn;
I enjoyed this short poem in reference to Maureen's poem Natures Gift all the Beauty" and I enjoyed both of them very much.
Your imagination was truly miraculously profound and very inventive and creative blogger imagery was very dominantly descriptive and elegantly expressive throughout.
Thank you for sharing and posting this for everyone to read imago blood be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Thank you so much Alex,
:-) Carolyn

Comment from Sonaleeka

Excellent

Very attractive and very beautifully written .I loved the word flow in the poem.Worth reading and thanks for sharing.

God bless!

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Thank you Sonaleeka, I am glad you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

What I like about this one is the poetic-ness of it. Your words conjure up instant images that allow your reader to go with you on the journey. Well written. xoxo Kiwi

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 Comment Written 17-Jul-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2014

Thank you Kiwi, (I love your pen-name) :-) Carolyn