Political Correctness?
Short Story-100 Word Dash-Contest Entry21 total reviews
Comment from seaglass
lol, I'm not sure I'd accept a kiss from a stranger, but this would be the absolute greatest shock, even for liberal straight guy. This is a good scenario for the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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lol, I'm not sure I'd accept a kiss from a stranger, but this would be the absolute greatest shock, even for liberal straight guy. This is a good scenario for the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Well, he thinks she's a total fox and the girl of his dreams... except she isn't a she. Yep, what to do with all that talk of tolerance now!!
Comment from livelylinda
Author: You got me! The last line was a surprise. A great story and one I've seen in real life more than once. I really don't care if the count is 100 or 102, I loved it. livelylinda
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Author: You got me! The last line was a surprise. A great story and one I've seen in real life more than once. I really don't care if the count is 100 or 102, I loved it. livelylinda
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much. It does happen. The guy in the picture is a pretty good looking girl... or guy... or... Well, it was so much easier when I was young!
Comment from Karen B.
Made me laugh and is definitely something to think about. Political correctness isn't always so easy when it gets too close. Well written entry into the contest, telling a whole story in 100 words.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Made me laugh and is definitely something to think about. Political correctness isn't always so easy when it gets too close. Well written entry into the contest, telling a whole story in 100 words.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Yes, exactly. It is one thing to talk tolerance. But, what's the reaction when it "smacks" you in the face? Hahaha.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in the contest
oh to be kissed by a sexy looking male the shock
your well penned words and vivid images tell this well
cheers..Smoothiecool
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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good luck in the contest
oh to be kissed by a sexy looking male the shock
your well penned words and vivid images tell this well
cheers..Smoothiecool
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much. A tough situation for one that is a champion for tolerance!
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most welcome..SC
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! This is a good entry. Funny, but this actually happened to my husband once... before I met him. He flirted with a 'girl' at a bar, and ... then she told him. He was floored. To this day, he says she was gorgeous. He had no clue!
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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LOL! This is a good entry. Funny, but this actually happened to my husband once... before I met him. He flirted with a 'girl' at a bar, and ... then she told him. He was floored. To this day, he says she was gorgeous. He had no clue!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2014
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The guy in the picture looks pretty good if you ask me! A real test of tolerance. Hahaha.
Comment from sibhus
Always a catch to everything, ha, ha. A humorous piece that makes for a great entry for the contest. Not easy geting a complete story in a hindred words, but you have done an excellent job, and good luck with the contest.
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Always a catch to everything, ha, ha. A humorous piece that makes for a great entry for the contest. Not easy geting a complete story in a hindred words, but you have done an excellent job, and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
This is just as clever and unexpected as hell. Certainly a very complete story in one hundred words. So much to consider. There is some deceit involved but then isn't there always? A funny but thought provoking piece. NG
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This is just as clever and unexpected as hell. Certainly a very complete story in one hundred words. So much to consider. There is some deceit involved but then isn't there always? A funny but thought provoking piece. NG
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from RodG
This story was fun to read because it brought back a memory of a similar incident I experienced in Singapore during the Vietnam War when he/she's were everywhere. Great dialog!
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This story was fun to read because it brought back a memory of a similar incident I experienced in Singapore during the Vietnam War when he/she's were everywhere. Great dialog!
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from LoannaLois
Now that's one way to surprise the reader. Nice job. That 's not where I thought you were going with this one. Great idea.
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Now that's one way to surprise the reader. Nice job. That 's not where I thought you were going with this one. Great idea.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014
Comment from kiwisteveh
Well done to create a complete story in this restricted word limit - it is striking and funny and a little thought-provoking.
For the record, I don't think being a liberal has got anything to do with it....
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
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Well done to create a complete story in this restricted word limit - it is striking and funny and a little thought-provoking.
For the record, I don't think being a liberal has got anything to do with it....
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2014