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Viewing comments for Chapter 57 "5-7-5 Porcelain Treasures"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from honeytree
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Wonderful art work and words written.

I love this porcelain doll

Interesting to know you restored its life.

Wonderful art collection.

honey tree

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    Thanks honeytree, ( I love your pen-name) Glad you enjoyed
    Porcelain Treasures. :-) Carolyn
reply by honeytree on 06-May-2014
    It was a very interesting poem.

    Annie
Comment from royowen
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This is a wonderful entry in this contest Carolyn, and you've formed it so symmetrically well! Good choice of art! This should do well, I love the subject choice! but then what would I know, I rarely do well anyway! Well done blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    I am not sure what they look for in the contest either Roy, I have yet to win one by committee vote. I have won a few prompts etc. However, if what I am going to write falls into a contest time line, I go ahead and enter as it cost nothing. LOL Maybe someday we will both hit it lucky. Glad you liked this one and thank you for the good wishes. :-) Carolyn
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Sounds like a wonderful job you have there, Carolyn! Those relics should make for interesting writing fodder. I look forward to reading them.

This was a good entry for the 5-7-5. Great alliteration with "Rare restored relics". I love the picture. That looks like a very old doll. Do you know how old it is?

Best wishes for the contest!

Connie

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    I actually did not get a near date on this one, but will check tomorrow when I go in. She was a sweet piece to work on. I had the privilege of attaching her arms and legs back to the body. We all had a part in getting her fit as a fiddle again. Thank you Connie for your interest. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
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Poem is just as beautiful as the doll. I can see this one in a pale pink and white Victorian style dress, a parasol in her hand and a large matching hat on her head. She is very gorgeous. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    I think Ms Hamlin has requested a picture when she is re-dressed. I would like to see that myself. Your description of the Victorian look is charming. Thanks for the awesome comments and rating. :-) Carolyn
reply by Cajungirl on 06-May-2014
    You are welcome.
Comment from jmdg1954
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Porcelain Treasures
Art collector's fantasy
Rare restored relics

I read the story first and your author note. Now the poem. Both were done well. The poem accompanies the photo perfectly and leaves more to the imagination.

Nicely done, Carolyn. John

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    Thanks John, I appreciate your fine review and that you liked this one. I know you are not into poetry all that much, but your comments are always wonderful to read. :-] Carolyn
Comment from krys123
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Carolyn, a very well expressed piece of poetry. This 5/7/5 celeb requirement that you have written is not only expressive but very illuminative and where the creativeness is not just the poem but the actual work on doll from the beginning of conception to the final product That is a beautiful workmanship Of a reconstruction. Thank you so much for sharing imposing this to make the Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    Thanks Alex,
    as usual your comments are so thoughtful and encouraging. I am glad you enjoyed Porcelain Treasures.
reply by krys123 on 06-May-2014
    I so did enjoy your poem and you are so welcome.
    Alex
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is a beautiful piece of writing that the author has created in this post. This is indeed a labour of love and as they say do something you love and you will never work a day in your life.

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    Hey, I like that, do what you love and you'll never work a day in your life. That's how art is to me. When I paint, draw or restore broken treasures I am completely content. I also teach children's art classes about seven months out of the year. So I do stay busy. Thank you for your comments and for liking this one. :-) Carolyn
reply by Tomes Johnston on 06-May-2014
    That sounds great.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Carolyn,

That must be a fun job to have. You and your team fixed the doll very nicely. Of course, like you say, she does need clothes now. Your poem about her is written well and is an enjoyable read. What talent you have!

Kat

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    Thank you Kat, I just posted a short essay also about Dolly. You may find it interesting. It is a fun position to have. I would not have come out of retirement for anything less than wonderful.:-) Carolyn
reply by MizKat on 05-May-2014
    I just read it reviewed it and gave it stars.
Comment from Gungalo
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Porcelain Treasures
Art collector(')s fantasy
Rare restored relics

Beautifully said Carolyn. Sigh. I love these types of writes.

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    Thank you dear, Glad you liked the 5-7-5, :-) Carolyn
reply by Gungalo on 05-May-2014
    Smile.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
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Hi Carolyn
It looks lovely, and very precious.
I am glad you helped to restore her
You will be happy all the way.
Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 05-May-2014


reply by the author on 05-May-2014
    Hi Benny and thanks for this review. It is a wonderful job, I would not have come out of retirement for anything less. I trust you are doing well.
    Love, Carolyn