It's Just a Kiss
Is a kiss just a kiss? Are you sure?16 total reviews
Comment from LilHippie
Oh, this one is VERY clever. You nailed it. This is the winner (prediction by me, if you care) LOL No seriously, very clever. Not expecting the end. Its hard to accomplish all you did in 100 words. You did it extremely well. I loved it. Good luck in the contest.
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Oh, this one is VERY clever. You nailed it. This is the winner (prediction by me, if you care) LOL No seriously, very clever. Not expecting the end. Its hard to accomplish all you did in 100 words. You did it extremely well. I loved it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2014
Comment from Leineco
- just a slip of the lip. . .
You never know what the consequences will be, when you indulge in spur of the moment fal-da-rah. Not to mention what the fall-out to the ones you love will be.
Tight write.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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- just a slip of the lip. . .
You never know what the consequences will be, when you indulge in spur of the moment fal-da-rah. Not to mention what the fall-out to the ones you love will be.
Tight write.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
Comment from lakeport
It'just a kiss, indeed it can be the start of something very big, I enjoyed rearding the story. God bless you. Lakeport....
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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It'just a kiss, indeed it can be the start of something very big, I enjoyed rearding the story. God bless you. Lakeport....
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much.
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your welcome.lakeport.
Comment from akulkumol
Very well written in 100 words, a very difficult task to complete a story with full climax. Nice expression of thought, a payback witha kiss...very well written...thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Very well written in 100 words, a very difficult task to complete a story with full climax. Nice expression of thought, a payback witha kiss...very well written...thanks for sharing
Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. Was it difficult to know what "it" was?
Comment from Millibrad
I wish I knew what they were. I think you should have said. I had to read this twice to even understand that they had appeared on him. I guess I got that much right? The rest seems crystal clear and does tell a story, so great job there.
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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I wish I knew what they were. I think you should have said. I had to read this twice to even understand that they had appeared on him. I guess I got that much right? The rest seems crystal clear and does tell a story, so great job there.
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thank you. Okay, I have alter it. I hope it is clearer now. Do you mind taking a look for me?
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Duh! Amazing. Now it's crystal clear. Poor guy.
Comment from loibeth
"Its [IT'S] Just a Kiss"
Lots of action in just a few words. It made me think and think to try to figure out what is going on and what the relationships are. I think I got it.
Good luck in your contest!
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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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"Its [IT'S] Just a Kiss"
Lots of action in just a few words. It made me think and think to try to figure out what is going on and what the relationships are. I think I got it.
Good luck in your contest!
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Comment Written 10-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2014
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Thank you very much. Wow. When did Tom fix the apostrophe problem? Was it really that hard to figure out?