The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Desert Daisies"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
24 total reviews
Comment from angelface2
OH my goodness, Carolyn, Desert daisies. They are so very pretty. I like your nice ABC poem about them. rhyme and rhythm is very good. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
OH my goodness, Carolyn, Desert daisies. They are so very pretty. I like your nice ABC poem about them. rhyme and rhythm is very good. Miss Sally
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thanks Miss Sally, I always enjoy your reviews. :-) Carolyn
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I am so glad you do. Thank you. Miss Sally
Comment from Petriesan
good luck in the contest
they are tiny
I love the desert after a rain and even without rain, at night
Nice little poem here
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
good luck in the contest
they are tiny
I love the desert after a rain and even without rain, at night
Nice little poem here
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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I appreciate your great comments. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Irish Rain
beautiful A-b-c poem, love the artwork also...my sister lives in Yuma, and loves it, but has quite a time keeping flowers alive, though native flowers thrive...good luck in contest!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
beautiful A-b-c poem, love the artwork also...my sister lives in Yuma, and loves it, but has quite a time keeping flowers alive, though native flowers thrive...good luck in contest!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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I have 'grown' to love the desert, however small the foliage may be. It is gorgeous. Haven't been to Yuma, I always think of the movie, 3;10 to Yuma.. A western. Thanks for this great review.
:-) Carolyn
Comment from 24chas
This was a very nice piece, noteandmore. I love desert flora and you really nailed it with this work. Good job and good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
This was a very nice piece, noteandmore. I love desert flora and you really nailed it with this work. Good job and good luck.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Believe me it was a warm day. :-) Glad you liked the poem and picture. Thanks for the wonderful review. Carolyn
Comment from GWinterwin
Great poem with a perfect picture to tell of this little flower, living in the desert sand. How pretty and vibrant they are and so pretty too.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
Great poem with a perfect picture to tell of this little flower, living in the desert sand. How pretty and vibrant they are and so pretty too.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Thanks so much, Carolyn
Comment from Janie King
This is a lovely, spring feeling poem, and I ready for spring. We are iced in again. I love daisies. I even had a little female poodle I named Daisy. She was my heart. She having a great time in Heaven with Daddy now. Good poem. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
This is a lovely, spring feeling poem, and I ready for spring. We are iced in again. I love daisies. I even had a little female poodle I named Daisy. She was my heart. She having a great time in Heaven with Daddy now. Good poem. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Yes, I saw Arkansas and my part of Missouri look pretty much alike right now. I love Daisies too.. These were the tiniest I had ever seen. Be safe and thank you Janie, Love, Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, Carolyn, it's hard to believe how little those daisys were. and the contrast to their surrounding. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
this is very well written, Carolyn, it's hard to believe how little those daisys were. and the contrast to their surrounding. I enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thanks a bunch... of virtual daisies....:-) Carolyn
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in good ABC Poem form
good alliterative grouping in daisy/desert/dry/delicate
nice alliteration in vibrant variance
I like the way you compare these delicate, colorful flowers with the rough and tumble tumble weeds :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
Your poem is in good ABC Poem form
good alliterative grouping in daisy/desert/dry/delicate
nice alliteration in vibrant variance
I like the way you compare these delicate, colorful flowers with the rough and tumble tumble weeds :-) Brooke
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Glad you enjoyed this one Brooke. This past trip we took, tumble weeds were everywhere. In New Mexico we were literally dodging them on the Interstate. Docile daisies and tumble weeds are a 'spectrum' apart. I appreciate that you noticed that. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Carolyn - I love daisies - used to make daisy chain necklaces as a wee thing. Great format for the contest and I wish you lots of luck.
Thanks for sharing this beauty.
Maureen
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
Dear Carolyn - I love daisies - used to make daisy chain necklaces as a wee thing. Great format for the contest and I wish you lots of luck.
Thanks for sharing this beauty.
Maureen
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thanks Maureen, I am ready for daisies of any size. These were the tiniest I have ever seen. I appreciate your review and kind thoughts. Love you, stay warm, we have more snow today. I can only imagine what your lovely land looks like. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Cajungirl
I enjoyed your ABC contest entry. The poem is so cute and the picture, too. I think that it is so nice that daisies actually grow in the sandy grounds of the desert. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
I enjoyed your ABC contest entry. The poem is so cute and the picture, too. I think that it is so nice that daisies actually grow in the sandy grounds of the desert. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2014
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Thanks for this thoughtful and enjoyable review. Daisies are among my favorites. :-) Carolyn
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When my son got married ten years ago, their wedding flowers were daisies. They were beautiful.