Make Your Mark Upon Our World
ABC Poem P-X Nonet13 total reviews
Comment from Allblockout
This is really a great poem and I agree with everything you said,even people who have money want to be a gangster of some sort and when you see that happening you know you have a big problem,Great poem
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This is really a great poem and I agree with everything you said,even people who have money want to be a gangster of some sort and when you see that happening you know you have a big problem,Great poem
Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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Some great insight there. Totally agree. Thanks for the kind words. Appreciated.
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You are very welcome :)
Comment from MERRY1
I have to agree with your view on society lacking in the education to progress. the emphasis here today seems to be more on sport and less on the knowledge that will be needed in the future to maintain our standard of living. I like youe poem.
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I have to agree with your view on society lacking in the education to progress. the emphasis here today seems to be more on sport and less on the knowledge that will be needed in the future to maintain our standard of living. I like youe poem.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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You are so correct. It is rare to make a living at sports. I was a great tennis player when I was young. I wouldn't have made a dime. The top one percent is still thousands of people. Appreciate the great review and insights.
Comment from seaglass
Combining the ABC and the Nonet into one poem is genius. And to then make it meaningful is awesome. I agree about education in our country. The very poor are defeated before they start. Sadly, I see no interest in making changes in the near future. But then, those who make decisions are very wealthy and have little understanding about the major population that include families in this dilemma.
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Combining the ABC and the Nonet into one poem is genius. And to then make it meaningful is awesome. I agree about education in our country. The very poor are defeated before they start. Sadly, I see no interest in making changes in the near future. But then, those who make decisions are very wealthy and have little understanding about the major population that include families in this dilemma.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2014
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We are on the same page. Appreciate your insightful remarks and great review. Thank you much.
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You are welcome