To Cherish Thorns
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Comment from amanda98653
haha, Mikey. Sometimes I do think we came from the same species.
A great pic you've used there..a tunnel and that light..reminds me of God.
"and though the seal is tight
I have an uneasy sense
of water all around me"
the "water" idea you told me about.perhaps there's some sort of similarity here? same road being traveled?
ilove this stanza:
" I boldly sing my song
I cry as I hear it echo
through the tunnel
growing as it joins
the work in progress"
"it joins"- our voices joining together?
very beautiful:
"'cause I know I should be
so, la di la di da to you my friend"
hugs
Amanda
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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haha, Mikey. Sometimes I do think we came from the same species.
A great pic you've used there..a tunnel and that light..reminds me of God.
"and though the seal is tight
I have an uneasy sense
of water all around me"
the "water" idea you told me about.perhaps there's some sort of similarity here? same road being traveled?
ilove this stanza:
" I boldly sing my song
I cry as I hear it echo
through the tunnel
growing as it joins
the work in progress"
"it joins"- our voices joining together?
very beautiful:
"'cause I know I should be
so, la di la di da to you my friend"
hugs
Amanda
Comment Written 13-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Yes to all of it. You have it about as clearly as I do. It is spiritual and about us and how we are all connected trying to live harmoniously together. I try to fit in and sometimes feel like I don't then sometimes I meet someone and I harmonize with them....stuff like that. Now it makes more sense to me!!! ha! hugs back, mikey
Comment from maggieadams
Wow, structure and imagery and depth of emotion...blows me away...probably need to read this many times, but la di la di da I need to be on my way. Loved it.
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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Wow, structure and imagery and depth of emotion...blows me away...probably need to read this many times, but la di la di da I need to be on my way. Loved it.
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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That is so nice to hear. I have to read it a few times myself. Sometimes I know what I am going to write. Then sometimes I write like this and find out when I reach the end. ha! Thank you so much. mikey
Comment from Sankey
What an interesting poem, my friend. It was a good choice in the picture as well as we found out down a bit.
Thanks again for some more of your curious mind works. Are these songs or just poems?
Oops one SPAG I think.. not quit(e) strutting kind of
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What an interesting poem, my friend. It was a good choice in the picture as well as we found out down a bit.
Thanks again for some more of your curious mind works. Are these songs or just poems?
Oops one SPAG I think.. not quit(e) strutting kind of
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2013
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2013
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boy. good eye there. a lot of words to spot that one. fixed it. this one is just a poem. one of those on and on ones. life and everyone being connected and being part of creation and God and we should be glad to be a part of it. hard to pick it out of all that. ha! mikey