To Cherish Thorns
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Wings"Free Verse Poetry
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Comment from Jackarrie
this freestyle poem is so beautiful I love the display and the image is brilliant.
born a caterpillar
hope grown in chrysalis
takes wild flight
well done, I love it. Mary
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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this freestyle poem is so beautiful I love the display and the image is brilliant.
born a caterpillar
hope grown in chrysalis
takes wild flight
well done, I love it. Mary
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Wow. What a wonderful words to hear. Thank you so much. Delighted that you enjoyed it. mikey
Comment from reconciled
Hey Mike....-smile- very beautiful.....and true. Love lifts heavy weight. Exceptional write...out of bullets sorry. love michael
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Hey Mike....-smile- very beautiful.....and true. Love lifts heavy weight. Exceptional write...out of bullets sorry. love michael
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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I will take the kind words and compliments any day. much thanks, mikey
Comment from sweetwoodjax
first of all, michael, i have to say that picture is just beautiful. did you find the picture first or were you blessed to find a perfect match for your poem. great words, exquisite imagery presented, an enjoyable read
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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first of all, michael, i have to say that picture is just beautiful. did you find the picture first or were you blessed to find a perfect match for your poem. great words, exquisite imagery presented, an enjoyable read
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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No, definitely blessed. Well, after a long search on Google that is. I love it too. So glad you liked my little poem. Thank you so very much, mikey
Comment from TAB_that's me
THis is great Mike comparing the transformation of butterfly with a love that is transformed or the transformation of humans to Angels when they die.
~Teresa~
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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THis is great Mike comparing the transformation of butterfly with a love that is transformed or the transformation of humans to Angels when they die.
~Teresa~
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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So glad you liked it. When I was done I looked at it and thought: "Hey, that is pretty good." hahaha. Thank you kindly, mikey
Comment from ravenblack
Yep. Love adorns us all with wings. But there is a danger ( nightshade is poisonous) that makes love all that more alluring. And also grants wings.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Yep. Love adorns us all with wings. But there is a danger ( nightshade is poisonous) that makes love all that more alluring. And also grants wings.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Ah. You got every little bit of this. thank you very much. mikey
Comment from nelliesellie
I LOVE the picture. I love the poem. I love butterflies, A lowly creature who takes on color and flight. Many living things start out in beauty. The beauty fades as their lives fade. The butterfly ends its life in beauty. Great work.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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I LOVE the picture. I love the poem. I love butterflies, A lowly creature who takes on color and flight. Many living things start out in beauty. The beauty fades as their lives fade. The butterfly ends its life in beauty. Great work.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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You are absolutely correct. It does end its life in beauty. Maybe we are supposed to also, but inside. Wonderful insightful comments and review. Making mikey think!! thank you so much and for all of these stars. big smiles, mikey
Comment from cinderbella
Just beautiful. The artwork you chose is stunning, and perfect for this poem. There is a book about butterflies, I can't remember who wrote it, but it has the most incredible stories, very spiritual creatures. The poem is perfect. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Just beautiful. The artwork you chose is stunning, and perfect for this poem. There is a book about butterflies, I can't remember who wrote it, but it has the most incredible stories, very spiritual creatures. The poem is perfect. :) Sandra
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Yeah. I think I know what you are referring to. I am delighted you like my little poem. What a nice review. Thank you very much, mikey
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
a double story. this is quite a piece. some of yours are deep but this one is just the right kind of deep. The butterfly and the human. Nice job
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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a double story. this is quite a piece. some of yours are deep but this one is just the right kind of deep. The butterfly and the human. Nice job
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Glad you liked it my friend. trying to not get so deep I go off the DEEP END. hahaha. glad you liked it. mikey
Comment from Sueellen11
Mickey,, this is so pretty,, the imagery of the butterfly,,, transforming is a sight I watch in my garden,, I have about 10 cocoons all leaving or ready to leave,,, but I wait but have missed the first few,,, I am sure they are the blue and black butterflies., back to your poem,, that is a great picture to accompany your poem,,, matches so well,,,yes your last stanza says it all love transform,, all,great write,,, blessings,,,sueellen
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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Mickey,, this is so pretty,, the imagery of the butterfly,,, transforming is a sight I watch in my garden,, I have about 10 cocoons all leaving or ready to leave,,, but I wait but have missed the first few,,, I am sure they are the blue and black butterflies., back to your poem,, that is a great picture to accompany your poem,,, matches so well,,,yes your last stanza says it all love transform,, all,great write,,, blessings,,,sueellen
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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I am so jealous of your backyard. Me stuck here in the desert. Well, at least I have your lovely poems about it. Glad you liked my little poem. Love is a wonderful thing. Almost makes the desert look good. Like a little oasis. Ah ha! Is there a poem in there? mikey
Comment from c_lucas
The butterfly is a good example of a success story. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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The butterfly is a good example of a success story. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2013
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So nice to read these complimentary words, Thank you kindly, mikey
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You're welcome, Mikey. Charlie