If Some Could Tell!
If we were learned to tell! A Non-Fiction in 220 words112 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so true and your delivery of this was spot on!! I really like your expose on wisdom and unwise person... Well done on the descriptions and explanatory phrasing.
All the best,
Melissa
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This is so true and your delivery of this was spot on!! I really like your expose on wisdom and unwise person... Well done on the descriptions and explanatory phrasing.
All the best,
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
Comment from Kelly Hanna
You make a great argument for the old adage better to not speak at all and seem a fool, then to speak and confirm it. Also, this brings a lot of self reflection; Am I wise or unwise?
I liked this write. You've done a good job in making the reader think!
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You make a great argument for the old adage better to not speak at all and seem a fool, then to speak and confirm it. Also, this brings a lot of self reflection; Am I wise or unwise?
I liked this write. You've done a good job in making the reader think!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
Comment from Heather Knight
Many a politician could profit by putting these ideas into practice. I totally agree with what you say here.
Thanks for sharing your ideas. Very interesting.
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Many a politician could profit by putting these ideas into practice. I totally agree with what you say here.
Thanks for sharing your ideas. Very interesting.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
Comment from beizanten
great picture and very wise words with it. Great first and second paragraph. a pretty powerful third paragraph. A very good ending. you have done well, keep up the great work!
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great picture and very wise words with it. Great first and second paragraph. a pretty powerful third paragraph. A very good ending. you have done well, keep up the great work!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
It's a nice piece of Self Improvement Non-Fiction transparently depicting the difference between the wise and the unwise.
Clarity of expression, impressive and matching the theme wording.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"A wise person speaks what is true, absolutely necessary, justifiable, or righteous."
"He speaks the right words to the right person(s), rightly, at right time and at the right place, in a right perspective."
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
It's a nice piece of Self Improvement Non-Fiction transparently depicting the difference between the wise and the unwise.
Clarity of expression, impressive and matching the theme wording.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
"A wise person speaks what is true, absolutely necessary, justifiable, or righteous."
"He speaks the right words to the right person(s), rightly, at right time and at the right place, in a right perspective."
Comment Written 18-Aug-2018
Comment from Thomas Bowling
An unwise person commits a blunder by telling anything and everything of the past, the present and the future about anybody, anywhere, at any time, as he likes.
I know a guy who can rattle off gossip for hours but knows nothing about current events. I asked him doesn't it bother you that you know everything about unimportant things and nothing about what matters?
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An unwise person commits a blunder by telling anything and everything of the past, the present and the future about anybody, anywhere, at any time, as he likes.
I know a guy who can rattle off gossip for hours but knows nothing about current events. I asked him doesn't it bother you that you know everything about unimportant things and nothing about what matters?
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
Comment from LaFrance
For using just 220 words your story described in detail the differences between the phrases, "Wise Man," and "Unwise Man." It was very thought-provoking as well.
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For using just 220 words your story described in detail the differences between the phrases, "Wise Man," and "Unwise Man." It was very thought-provoking as well.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2018
Comment from Artasylum
This is an interesting write... you did a very thorough argument for your side. Whik felt like the offense. So great argument and I look forward to more of your pov writes. Thanks so much yours, diana
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This is an interesting write... you did a very thorough argument for your side. Whik felt like the offense. So great argument and I look forward to more of your pov writes. Thanks so much yours, diana
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Plato was right and your write backed it up, those wise philosophers had something to say to help others, fools say something flippant which is meaningless, love Dolly x
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Plato was right and your write backed it up, those wise philosophers had something to say to help others, fools say something flippant which is meaningless, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018
Comment from tfawcus
As your writing suggests, there is often more wisdom in keeping silent than in speaking without due thought. People often say more than they need and it can lead to unfortunate consequences.
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As your writing suggests, there is often more wisdom in keeping silent than in speaking without due thought. People often say more than they need and it can lead to unfortunate consequences.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2018