Comment from ladykah81

Excellent

Nice job. Your poem made me chuckle, it reminded me of my little pug who thinks he's a big rottie. Well done. The picture was perfect.

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thanks for the great review. I am happy you enjoyed it. My daughter has a Chihuahua and a Chocolate Lab. They have reversed roles, she is the boss and he is the wuss. :-)

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Imagination

Little Kitten climbs a tree

Mountain-lion roars
aren't we having fun.
God haiku 5-7-5 syllable count
Best of luck in the contest

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Hey, I am delighted you liked this one. thanks for the well wishes. :-)

Comment from SteveY

Excellent

Great job in coming up with this one. Love the imagery in your words and the picture captures this one perrrrrrfectly!!! Very well done my friend.

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Glad you enjoyed this one Steve, thanks for the great review. :-)

Comment from Cookie333

Excellent

Hahaha, this one reminds me of when our 'Spud' was a kitten. He wasn't afraid of anything...at least not until it was too late. I enjoyed the roar of your mountain lion.
thank you
karen

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

I am delighted this one made you laugh, :-)

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

This Just for Fun (5-7-5) writing prompt entry fulfills the syllable count perfectly and is complimented by the picture. It brings a universal experience for those who love cats, like me, to a fun place. Nice work. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thanks GracieAnn for the wonderful review of this one, cats are neat creatures. :-)

Comment from TAB_that's me

Good

You do not have the correct syllable count for this contest. your syllables are 6-7-6 instead of 5-7-5. Good luck though.
~Teresa~

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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

I appreciate your edits, take a look now, :-0

Comment from Tessa Kay

Excellent

Now it works. Perfect 5-7-5.
And I think it flows better, as well, is tighter.

I-ma-gi-na-tion = 5
moun-tain-li-on-roars = 5.
Stars = 5
Well done.
All the best in the competition.
Tessa

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2013

Thanks for the heads up! See what you think now, (do I get a better rating?) :-0