Comment from JM daSilva

Excellent

The picture says a lot about her reaction, but not whether she brought the beer. lol. Sometimes they complain but do it anyway.

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks Jm for your review, I appreciate it. Have a nice day. Bill

reply by JM daSilva on 17-Oct-2013

Welcome. You, too.

Comment from Winslow

Excellent

Dear Cedar,

I guess by your picture you are telling your husband he wants just one beer? (LOL)

Congratulations on winning the crude, err 5-7-5 contest.

Warm regards,

Winslow

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks for your review my friend. Have a nice day. Bill

Comment from pbroussard209

Excellent

lol This sounds so familiar. Awesome poem and I loved the picture as it looks like me almost everyday when dealing with my husband and kids. And yes you brought a smile to my lips along with a chuckle.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks for your review, I appreciate it. I'm also glad that it made you smile. Have a nice day. Bill

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

when you're done cleaning
and washing all the dishes
bring me a cold beer

I've seen lines/jokes like this before, but it doesn't stop me from snickering each time. Congrats on the winners circle ... John

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks John for your review, I appreciate it. I'm glad it made you smile. Have a nice day. Bill

Comment from womanwriter

Excellent

You'da got more that a hit up the side of the head with a frying pan if you had asked that of me. LOL Loved the poem but the picture was truly priceless.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks for your review and your offer of a smack on the head with a frying pan, most men could probably use one (ha!) Have a good day my friend. Bill

Comment from Emeka13

Excellent

Hi Cedar,
Before I read your Author's note I tried to put a funny interpretation to the yellow middle finger. One good one was 'Give me one minute darling, and I'll be with you'. Ha ha ha. Another is 'You are down to your last beer or have you got some more upstairs'. We've got to laugh at times.
Grude (good and rude) stuff.
Remain blessed
Emeka

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks Emeka for your excellent review, I really enjoyed it. Have a great day my friend. Bill

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Cedar,

First of all let me congratulate you for winning the Just for Fun contest. You did a good job in writing this poem. I look forward to reading more of your work.

MizKat

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks my friend for your nice comments, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill

Comment from amada

Excellent

Congratulations in winning this contest. Wow! I bet those words will never appear in your household again. My hat goes to the lady! (And the one who wrote about it).

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thanks my friend for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a nice day. Bill

Comment from godlucifer

Excellent

funny n humorous,excitedly acceptable. curious with no doubt,asking is better than telling. curiosity sometime can be selfish and i guess you were selfish by telling her instead of asking her. your poem was a joy to read and to its trueness it was funny. i enjoyed n reading your poem. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thank you for your review, I appreciate your comments. Have a great day. Bill

Comment from mmayen

Excellent

This is a big joke. It's also funny when I think of what will take the place of a cold beer. It's creative and original. Congrats on the win. I enjoyed the read.

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2013

Thank you my friend for your review, I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Have a good day. Bill