The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Come Morning"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
35 total reviews
Comment from lakeport
Come morning, indeed beautiful sunrise, That's a beautiful expressed story poem, very nice flow,I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Come morning, indeed beautiful sunrise, That's a beautiful expressed story poem, very nice flow,I enjoyed reading it. God bless you.Hugs!Lakeport.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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I am so happy you enjoyed this one Lakeport, :-) Carolyn
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your welome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written good word choices add to the imagery through out making the readers realize how beautiful a morning can be well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Hello my friend this is well written good word choices add to the imagery through out making the readers realize how beautiful a morning can be well done regards Jill
Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Erick and Jill, thanks so much for this wonderful review. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Bundhoo
Wow this is really awesome and intersting poem. Love that picture you included ! Morning is a big blessing of ALMIGHTY ALLALH! wish people would realize the importance of morning!!Love your poem!!
Regards,
BUNDHOO;)
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Wow this is really awesome and intersting poem. Love that picture you included ! Morning is a big blessing of ALMIGHTY ALLALH! wish people would realize the importance of morning!!Love your poem!!
Regards,
BUNDHOO;)
Comment Written 04-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2013
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Thank you so much my friend for the wonderful comments and rating of 'Come Morning'. I hope school is going well for you.
:-) Carolyn
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You are sooooooooo welcome;)
Everything is going well and my exams will start in the mid of NOVEMBER!!:(
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Loved the message behind this write, Carolyn, that tomorrow is another day "Come Morning". A poem full of inspiration to never give up hope and to see the beauty that can present itself just around the corner.
Well written. I enjoyed this very much!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Loved the message behind this write, Carolyn, that tomorrow is another day "Come Morning". A poem full of inspiration to never give up hope and to see the beauty that can present itself just around the corner.
Well written. I enjoyed this very much!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Thanks Connie for this lovely review of Come Morning. :-) Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
I usually don't like free verse very much, but I really like this poem. It is well-written and makes sense. Good sense, I might add. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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I usually don't like free verse very much, but I really like this poem. It is well-written and makes sense. Good sense, I might add. Miss Sally
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Well I am honored that you like this. I had always thought that a poem should rhyme, when I met 'free verse' I vowed it should at least 'make sense.' Thanks Miss Sally, :-) Carolyn
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is a very well-written poem and flows nicely. We're not poets so we never review poetic styles. Tag teaming with Miss Evelyn while she is in a rehab center with a broken hip and no computer. God loves you and we do too.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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This is a very well-written poem and flows nicely. We're not poets so we never review poetic styles. Tag teaming with Miss Evelyn while she is in a rehab center with a broken hip and no computer. God loves you and we do too.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Thank you Janie for reading and writing on behalf of Ms Evelyn. I am honored she read the 'free verse' poem, and that she liked it. It is a different style for me. Give her a hug for me. :-) Love, Carolyn
Comment from NicciFaye
Joy cometh and you brought it in a beautiful way. A lovely write and embracing poem. Reminds me of the word, "joy cometh", after all the things, the peacefulness of arising to ...energize in the rapture of the mornings light
bathe in the abundant opportunities
that awaits you "
Simply beautiful
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Joy cometh and you brought it in a beautiful way. A lovely write and embracing poem. Reminds me of the word, "joy cometh", after all the things, the peacefulness of arising to ...energize in the rapture of the mornings light
bathe in the abundant opportunities
that awaits you "
Simply beautiful
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Thanks NicciFaye for the fabulous comments and rating. I am happy you enjoyed 'Come Morning'. Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
Hi Carolyn,
I like your free verse poem for the contest. It's written very well and is an interesting read. I'm beginning to like free verse.
Blessings, Kat
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Hi Carolyn,
I like your free verse poem for the contest. It's written very well and is an interesting read. I'm beginning to like free verse.
Blessings, Kat
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Me too. Thanks Kat, I am glad you liked this one. Have a great day. :-) Carolyn
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the refreshment and hope that comes in the morning. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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this is very well written, notesandmore, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about the refreshment and hope that comes in the morning. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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I appreciate your good wishes and wonderful review. Glad you enjoyed it. Carolyn
Comment from The Death
Hi,
This is a beautiful poem!!
I loved the theme and the shifts that you have included here.You have presented it beautifully.I like first few line the most.I enjoyed reading it.Best of luck:)
Anupam
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Hi,
This is a beautiful poem!!
I loved the theme and the shifts that you have included here.You have presented it beautifully.I like first few line the most.I enjoyed reading it.Best of luck:)
Anupam
Comment Written 03-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2013
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Thanks so much Anupam, I always appreciate your wonderful comments and am overwhelmed with the rating of Come Morning, Have a great day, my friend, Carolyn