Want to be your lover
Lyrical poem34 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
What a lovely poem for your wife and so beautifully written. She is lucky that all you have written - all those lovely words are for her. I like the way you do not just want to be her lover but also all the other important things like - being her best friend and giving all that you can. Lovely sentiments. Regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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What a lovely poem for your wife and so beautifully written. She is lucky that all you have written - all those lovely words are for her. I like the way you do not just want to be her lover but also all the other important things like - being her best friend and giving all that you can. Lovely sentiments. Regards Dorothy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Dorothy,
thank you with kind regards to your review and your wonderful sentiments. I appreciated them very much.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
These are great song lyrics, JumboJ! The fact that you wrote them for your wife of 23 years makes it even better. :)
"Want to cover you with body breeze and give you love with endless tease" .... my fave part. Love how you ended it with "be the last thing you think of before the final curtain falls".
Well done ~ JumboJ!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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These are great song lyrics, JumboJ! The fact that you wrote them for your wife of 23 years makes it even better. :)
"Want to cover you with body breeze and give you love with endless tease" .... my fave part. Love how you ended it with "be the last thing you think of before the final curtain falls".
Well done ~ JumboJ!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Connie,
yeah my favorite part as well. Thank you so much for your wonderful review and excellent rating, most appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from emjaihammond
Such a beautiful tribute to a wife. I'm sure she appreciates the loving feelings that brought it to life. How precious it is to love someone for that long and to still enjoy a life together. May you have many more to come. Happy Anniversary!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Such a beautiful tribute to a wife. I'm sure she appreciates the loving feelings that brought it to life. How precious it is to love someone for that long and to still enjoy a life together. May you have many more to come. Happy Anniversary!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Emjai,
thank you for your wonderful comments. We are very lucky to have each other ,as you know, its only us... So all my love is hers.
I appreciate this review and your rating with love in my heart.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from lorijean
A beautifully written poem dedicated to your wife, such a wonderful thing to do, she must be so proud, I was with a musician songwriter for 16 years and do you know he never wrote a single word for me, just look how many I have written for him....
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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A beautifully written poem dedicated to your wife, such a wonderful thing to do, she must be so proud, I was with a musician songwriter for 16 years and do you know he never wrote a single word for me, just look how many I have written for him....
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Lori J,
well that sort of tells me something about him straight away. I know you can't help who you fall in love with, but there is something about sharing and words written with love in mind are a prerequisite, especially being a musician/song writer. Just keep the sparkle in your eyes that I see and I know some who see's it will see the same thing I do... Genuine... Loving and beautiful... The right person's out there for you... I know it!
Thank you so much for this wonderful review and the stars that accompany it, most appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from jlsavell
Jumbo J, what beautiful lyrics! The words falls like fluid grace upon a tender heart. I am sure your wife was moved to tears over this wonderful work. well done.. jlsavell
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Jumbo J, what beautiful lyrics! The words falls like fluid grace upon a tender heart. I am sure your wife was moved to tears over this wonderful work. well done.. jlsavell
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Jlsavell,
she was, I wrote this one for her to put on f/s and I did another to put in her card, we had a lovely day, surrounded by heaps of love.
Thank you so much for your wonderful review and excellent rating,most appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James
Comment from TheNakedPoet
wow this was a stunning love poem
packed with emotion and tenderness for the one you love and admire
it rang out like a song in dedication to two hearts fused irrefutably together
i'm sure your wife enjoyed this serenade when you read it to her
well done
please enjoy a sixer
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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wow this was a stunning love poem
packed with emotion and tenderness for the one you love and admire
it rang out like a song in dedication to two hearts fused irrefutably together
i'm sure your wife enjoyed this serenade when you read it to her
well done
please enjoy a sixer
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Naked P,
how could I not enjoy a sixer that comes with such wonderful sentiment?
Thank you for this very fine review, I am deeply touched.
Kindest thoughts,
James
Comment from Kiki12
I can't six you :(
I think this is the most perfect gift you could give your wife (Happy anniversary, by the way, what an accomplishment) Everything you wrote is heart-felt and selfless with a beautiful intent of sharing love for eternity. Absolutely lovely.
xx
Kiki
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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I can't six you :(
I think this is the most perfect gift you could give your wife (Happy anniversary, by the way, what an accomplishment) Everything you wrote is heart-felt and selfless with a beautiful intent of sharing love for eternity. Absolutely lovely.
xx
Kiki
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Kiki,
I know you can't, especially today... It's my anniversary!
Oh, sorry I read that a little wrong... You said six? LOL
All jokes aside, thank you for your warm and genuine sentiments that accompany this wonderful review... mmmmmmmm... Thanks, you are appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from adewpearl
Thirty years together - in this day and age, that is just wonderful :-)
I love the meter line :-)
strong rhymes and proximate rhymes
good flow
a wonderfully upbeat poem, generous in spirit
Any woman would swoon at such declarations - lots of women are lucky to have their husband mumble in their direction when they speak after thirty years. LOL :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Thirty years together - in this day and age, that is just wonderful :-)
I love the meter line :-)
strong rhymes and proximate rhymes
good flow
a wonderfully upbeat poem, generous in spirit
Any woman would swoon at such declarations - lots of women are lucky to have their husband mumble in their direction when they speak after thirty years. LOL :-) Brooke
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Brooke,
and that's why we will be together until the final curtain falls.
I am so glad you liked it Brooke, you know your opinion is always treasured and respected.
We had a wonderful day, doing things together... But we always do so it must mean that every day is an anniversary.
Thank you so much for this review, it is appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from Jaq Cee
Beautiful lyrical poem James and it just exudes the love you have for your wife. It flows well and is well-penned.
Are you going to put it to music? It sounds as if it could make a love song to be proud of. :) Jaq xx
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Beautiful lyrical poem James and it just exudes the love you have for your wife. It flows well and is well-penned.
Are you going to put it to music? It sounds as if it could make a love song to be proud of. :) Jaq xx
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Jaq,
it's always a true pleasure to receive your wonderful reviews Jaq.
Thank you so much. I love to put this to music, but I don't want to disturb the neighborhood dogs with my singing, maybe you could give it a go? LOL
Thank you you for your sentiments, they are appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment from GregoryCody
This is beautifully written. Great dialogue, voice is strong. Great descriptions, great flow entirely. All around a wonderful piece, romantic ;)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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This is beautifully written. Great dialogue, voice is strong. Great descriptions, great flow entirely. All around a wonderful piece, romantic ;)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Hi Gregory,
thank you my friend for this wonderful review, it is appreciated.
Kindest thoughts,
James