The Heart of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 34 "Awareness"'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway
24 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
yes this is well written my friend full of imagery which brings the poem to life so well I enjoyed my friend such a beautiful poem well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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yes this is well written my friend full of imagery which brings the poem to life so well I enjoyed my friend such a beautiful poem well done regards Jill
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Thank you Jill. I hope you are having a good day. Carolyn
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This piece resonates in my heart and soul. You describe so vividly that sacred moment between the activity of the day and the stillness of night - my favorite time. It is like being suspended between Earth and heaven in perfect synch with everything around you. You are brilliant in the way you paint this peaceful and stirring picture. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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This piece resonates in my heart and soul. You describe so vividly that sacred moment between the activity of the day and the stillness of night - my favorite time. It is like being suspended between Earth and heaven in perfect synch with everything around you. You are brilliant in the way you paint this peaceful and stirring picture. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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I thank you for your wonderful review and the comments regarding your own feelings about it. Carolyn
Comment from jmdg1954
****** those are the six stars I wish I had in order to award you with.
That po was beautiful. I loved the words, line for line. Then how you concluded it with the trailing words.,.
And then
I am Aware
It
Is
You
Nicely done... John
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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****** those are the six stars I wish I had in order to award you with.
That po was beautiful. I loved the words, line for line. Then how you concluded it with the trailing words.,.
And then
I am Aware
It
Is
You
Nicely done... John
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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And thank you for the 'twinkling six' stars and your special way of commenting on my work. :-) Carolyn
Comment from amarherig14
Lovely free style poem with wonderful description of a perfect night.The picture used is a good choice for it.AS you enjoy all this breath taking beauty there is something amiss: "It Is You." Love is in the air and has to be shared with your love.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Lovely free style poem with wonderful description of a perfect night.The picture used is a good choice for it.AS you enjoy all this breath taking beauty there is something amiss: "It Is You." Love is in the air and has to be shared with your love.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed this one. Carolyn
Comment from MizKat
notesandmore - I enjoyed reading your poem. It's very well and is interesting. The picture is great with it too. Thanks for sharing. Kat
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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notesandmore - I enjoyed reading your poem. It's very well and is interesting. The picture is great with it too. Thanks for sharing. Kat
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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You are welcome, I am glad you enjoyed it. Carolyn
Comment from Frank Atwood
Very nice and a very sentimental feeling one is left at the end. One is a lonely number. God bless and keep up the great writing.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Very nice and a very sentimental feeling one is left at the end. One is a lonely number. God bless and keep up the great writing.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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I always appreciate your encouragement, thank you, Carolyn
Comment from Curly Girly
This is a lovely poem about the stillness of the evening and of the night noises. One does become so much more aware of everything when all alone.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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This is a lovely poem about the stillness of the evening and of the night noises. One does become so much more aware of everything when all alone.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Isn't that a fact? Glad you liked it. Carolyn
Comment from EMB
Yes, I can actually say that I do this often, as long as I have enough mosquito repellent. LOL It can be as tranquil as you describe it in the wonderful poem. :)
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Yes, I can actually say that I do this often, as long as I have enough mosquito repellent. LOL It can be as tranquil as you describe it in the wonderful poem. :)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Keep the spray handy! Thanks for reading and enjoying. Carolyn
Comment from jobax
Astronomical references give way to the garden at night and finally to one thing that makes love real ... you. Nice rhyme and meaning. Good work.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Astronomical references give way to the garden at night and finally to one thing that makes love real ... you. Nice rhyme and meaning. Good work.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the great review and understanding of this one. Carolyn
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of leading the reader where the reader needs to go. Although this piece has very little rhyming, it flows well. This piece starts strong but ends even stronger. Good job.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
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The writer does a good job of leading the reader where the reader needs to go. Although this piece has very little rhyming, it flows well. This piece starts strong but ends even stronger. Good job.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2013
Thank you, have a great weekend. Carolyn