Steve's Poems for Kids
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Clowns Wanted"A collection of my children's poems
17 total reviews
Comment from RYME4U
This is very amusing. I like the story it tells and the rhythm and rhyme are done well.This is an excellent job and is descriptive and well written.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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This is very amusing. I like the story it tells and the rhythm and rhyme are done well.This is an excellent job and is descriptive and well written.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from Lisa Charlie
Fantastic write!
I really enjoyed reading this piece. Perfect poem for children (and adults too).
The rhymes were spot on and the lines flowed perfectly. Danced my way through the whole piece.
Great job!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Fantastic write!
I really enjoyed reading this piece. Perfect poem for children (and adults too).
The rhymes were spot on and the lines flowed perfectly. Danced my way through the whole piece.
Great job!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Lisa, thanks for the review and the great compliment - glad you danced!
Steve
Comment from playinaround
This is wonderful! I love the pic that goes so well with the poem. And the poem is really colorful and interesting. I love all of the animated names and personalities. This poem was a real pleasure to read. A true contender for the contest. Very clever and fun to read!!
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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This is wonderful! I love the pic that goes so well with the poem. And the poem is really colorful and interesting. I love all of the animated names and personalities. This poem was a real pleasure to read. A true contender for the contest. Very clever and fun to read!!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the kind words.
Steve
Comment from Cedar
This is a great entry for the contest. I got a few good chuckles from reading it, but clowns are supposed to make you laugh. I did notice one thing, please check the spelling of "somesault". I believe it should be "somersault". Please check and good luck. Bill
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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This is a great entry for the contest. I got a few good chuckles from reading it, but clowns are supposed to make you laugh. I did notice one thing, please check the spelling of "somesault". I believe it should be "somersault". Please check and good luck. Bill
Comment Written 13-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Bill, thanks for the review and the spag alert.
Steve
Comment from Rmocruz
This is an amusing exercise in alliteration, reminiscent of
the wonderful Doctor Seuss. Playful colorful phrasing and
rhyme present a whimsical humorous story.
A light pleasant verse, well crafted.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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This is an amusing exercise in alliteration, reminiscent of
the wonderful Doctor Seuss. Playful colorful phrasing and
rhyme present a whimsical humorous story.
A light pleasant verse, well crafted.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
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You're welcome.
Comment from Curt Winslow
A great job writing about clowns. I know many people that have a great fear of them. We have King and his book It to thank for that..lol. Great job!
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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A great job writing about clowns. I know many people that have a great fear of them. We have King and his book It to thank for that..lol. Great job!
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Thanks, Curt.
Steve
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This was a really fun and whimsical piece. I thought the craftsmanship superb in the use of the names and all the alliteration used to keep the verse moving along at an upbeat pace. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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This was a really fun and whimsical piece. I thought the craftsmanship superb in the use of the names and all the alliteration used to keep the verse moving along at an upbeat pace. I wish you all the best in the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
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Thank you.
Steve