Mister President, sleep well
Songlyric of protest against war42 total reviews
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Wow. A strong write, Ine. I'm sure you'll get a lot of responses of differing opinions on this one! This is different for you. Well written indeed, my friend. War is a terrible thing for sure. Hugs, Av.
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Wow. A strong write, Ine. I'm sure you'll get a lot of responses of differing opinions on this one! This is different for you. Well written indeed, my friend. War is a terrible thing for sure. Hugs, Av.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from rchitwood
I hope he dreams and sees all the faces that this war has killed and families who are left with pain. Your poem is very touching my friend and I have to agree we need and want peace. Very good structure and smooth line flow and your photo and music goes well with your writing. Blessings Rita
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I hope he dreams and sees all the faces that this war has killed and families who are left with pain. Your poem is very touching my friend and I have to agree we need and want peace. Very good structure and smooth line flow and your photo and music goes well with your writing. Blessings Rita
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from amada
Oh yes, i always wondered if presidents would go so easily to declare war if he would have one son in age to go to fight. War is such a merciless conclusion.
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Oh yes, i always wondered if presidents would go so easily to declare war if he would have one son in age to go to fight. War is such a merciless conclusion.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from TammyGail
Excellent work on these lyrics robina
I loved it... Very well written and expressed
Perfect imagery and great clip
I hope he does have horrible mars
I despise that son of a bitch
Great writing here very much enjoyed
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Excellent work on these lyrics robina
I loved it... Very well written and expressed
Perfect imagery and great clip
I hope he does have horrible mars
I despise that son of a bitch
Great writing here very much enjoyed
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from l.raven
I don't think anything bothers this man. Pres!! As long as he keeps the rich richer people dying, giving their lives for this country truly doesn't bother him. Very well written. And has a good smoth read tio it. Well done.
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I don't think anything bothers this man. Pres!! As long as he keeps the rich richer people dying, giving their lives for this country truly doesn't bother him. Very well written. And has a good smoth read tio it. Well done.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Nomar Chagrin
Robina, this is the ddepest and most hard-hitting poem I've seen in a long time. The stark tone crowds out any thoughts beyond your theme here. The sarcastic lines are deepened by the serious issues of death they address. This was all-around powerful and riveting, Robina. Submit it.
~ CJ
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Robina, this is the ddepest and most hard-hitting poem I've seen in a long time. The stark tone crowds out any thoughts beyond your theme here. The sarcastic lines are deepened by the serious issues of death they address. This was all-around powerful and riveting, Robina. Submit it.
~ CJ
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Glad you liked it so much. And thanks so much for the lovely six.
Comment from MyYiaYia
That was pretty good and made a lot of sense. There are a lot of protest songs written during war time and those are the ones that seem to last the longest and are the most popular. I enjoyed the video as well. Deb :0)
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That was pretty good and made a lot of sense. There are a lot of protest songs written during war time and those are the ones that seem to last the longest and are the most popular. I enjoyed the video as well. Deb :0)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Maureen's Pen
This is well written and your lines hold much power and cause the reader to ponder them throughout your work.
Overall an intriguing piece of work.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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This is well written and your lines hold much power and cause the reader to ponder them throughout your work.
Overall an intriguing piece of work.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine
Comment from Razz
Dear ina,
I don't think you have a clue as to who "Mr. President" really is. Believe me, he sleeps very well, better than any president before him. His Marxists buddies assure him of his policies...all of them. He is but a puppet in the great scheme of things, and I do mean scheme.
Nobody wants to see any of our soldiers maimed or killed. Nobody. But there are evil people in this world and American soldiers have been protecting other people and countries (yours too) with their lives. Not another country in this world can be credited with keeping foreigners safe, except America, and maybe a few Brits.
Mr. Presidents sleeps well even in the face of joblessness, poverty, violence, homelessness, crime, drugs, illegal immigration, communism, corruption in his own cabinet, the price of oil, the price of milk, the price of bread, the housing crash, the banking meltdown, the devaluing of the dollar, the American treasuries being dumped (as I write this) the American Constitution be shredded (as I write this) cash, as of today, made illegal tender in Italy, (new edict) more than $1,300, soon to be dropped to $300,
Swiss police and their dollar sniffing dogs now at its borders.
Mr. president sleeps very well. He sleeps through it all because, he is part of it all.
There are things going on around this world that, it seems you have no idea about. We are on a collision course with pure evil. Please inform yourself. Please open your eyes, its all around you in plain sight. And, if you are Christian, I'd suggest you grab the nearest Bible and begin reading. Open your heart to God and ask Him to lead and protect you.
Are you familiar with what is going on around the world concerning the violence against, and killing of Christians? Are you familiar with "caliphate?"
Please, ina, try to see the whole picture, the global picture. You must prepare for what is coming down the pike.
Yes, Mr. President sleeps very well. His place in life has been assured.
In peace and love,
Razz
P.S.
Mr. president not only sleeps well, but he parties hardy on American citizen's tax money.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Dear ina,
I don't think you have a clue as to who "Mr. President" really is. Believe me, he sleeps very well, better than any president before him. His Marxists buddies assure him of his policies...all of them. He is but a puppet in the great scheme of things, and I do mean scheme.
Nobody wants to see any of our soldiers maimed or killed. Nobody. But there are evil people in this world and American soldiers have been protecting other people and countries (yours too) with their lives. Not another country in this world can be credited with keeping foreigners safe, except America, and maybe a few Brits.
Mr. Presidents sleeps well even in the face of joblessness, poverty, violence, homelessness, crime, drugs, illegal immigration, communism, corruption in his own cabinet, the price of oil, the price of milk, the price of bread, the housing crash, the banking meltdown, the devaluing of the dollar, the American treasuries being dumped (as I write this) the American Constitution be shredded (as I write this) cash, as of today, made illegal tender in Italy, (new edict) more than $1,300, soon to be dropped to $300,
Swiss police and their dollar sniffing dogs now at its borders.
Mr. president sleeps very well. He sleeps through it all because, he is part of it all.
There are things going on around this world that, it seems you have no idea about. We are on a collision course with pure evil. Please inform yourself. Please open your eyes, its all around you in plain sight. And, if you are Christian, I'd suggest you grab the nearest Bible and begin reading. Open your heart to God and ask Him to lead and protect you.
Are you familiar with what is going on around the world concerning the violence against, and killing of Christians? Are you familiar with "caliphate?"
Please, ina, try to see the whole picture, the global picture. You must prepare for what is coming down the pike.
Yes, Mr. President sleeps very well. His place in life has been assured.
In peace and love,
Razz
P.S.
Mr. president not only sleeps well, but he parties hardy on American citizen's tax money.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine. Yes I do know who he is. But this was about one a long time ago. As far as I am concerned most leaders are as guilty as hell. That is what the poem is about.
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Sure. You're welcome.
Comment from Hareem.S
A lovely poem Robina. One for your bests. I love the message here and your somewhat sarcastic tone. Yes the president is accountable to us and its freedom to expression to talk about his actions. A lovely poem.
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A lovely poem Robina. One for your bests. I love the message here and your somewhat sarcastic tone. Yes the president is accountable to us and its freedom to expression to talk about his actions. A lovely poem.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2012
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Thanks for your kind and thoughtful review. Blessings and take care, Ine