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Physical, and mental self-theropy.
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wierdgrace
This is great, I am printing and saving, well said, I loved it, and I could always use a small change at a time, thank you for your story. no errors and no revisions
Comment Written 13-Jul-2010
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Isaiah Ramesses
Great presentation to start your book, Knowledge. I'd have to say that common sense becomes less common these days.
Nice bit of information here.
Isaiah Ramesses
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c_lucas
Some very interesting tips. Some I already do, others I will research. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very easy read.
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