Willing Hearts
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Comment from lancellot
A nice family filled chapter with plenty of displays of affection, declaration of love and additions to an ever-growing family. You touched on some worries, gave some assurances and we see how life moving forward could be like. Well written.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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A nice family filled chapter with plenty of displays of affection, declaration of love and additions to an ever-growing family. You touched on some worries, gave some assurances and we see how life moving forward could be like. Well written.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Only one chapter to go. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Noah is determined to become a real family man, he loves Sami that much. Once that happens, perhaps she will stop being so nervous. I'm sure there must be a wedding coming up soon. They can't carry on like this much longer, not the way their emotions are spirreling out of control. Excellent chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Noah is determined to become a real family man, he loves Sami that much. Once that happens, perhaps she will stop being so nervous. I'm sure there must be a wedding coming up soon. They can't carry on like this much longer, not the way their emotions are spirreling out of control. Excellent chapter, my friend. :)) Sandra
"If you're already (of) aware of this, (remove the 'of')
Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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I will make that correction. Thank you for the catch and the kind review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed reading your chapter! Your characters, especially Noah, are coming to life in such a real way. I love the way Noah's awkwardness around Sami's family feels so natural. The playful moments with Greg and the tender moments between Noah and Sami make it so heartwarming. It keeps me hooked! Keep up the great work!
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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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I really enjoyed reading your chapter! Your characters, especially Noah, are coming to life in such a real way. I love the way Noah's awkwardness around Sami's family feels so natural. The playful moments with Greg and the tender moments between Noah and Sami make it so heartwarming. It keeps me hooked! Keep up the great work!
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Comment Written 19-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the encouragement.
