Echoes in Canyons
Excuses become echoes40 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I don't like people who always make excuses for their actions. Errors or bad deeds are never their fault.
Good composition and presentation.
Good job, my friend.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I don't like people who always make excuses for their actions. Errors or bad deeds are never their fault.
Good composition and presentation.
Good job, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you again gypsy for a great review
Comment from Monica Chaddick
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. The flow and rhyme were very reader friendly. The message came through loud and clear ~ NO EXCUSES!!! You did a wonderful job on this piece.
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I thoroughly enjoyed your poem. The flow and rhyme were very reader friendly. The message came through loud and clear ~ NO EXCUSES!!! You did a wonderful job on this piece.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Most times, excuses are used to put the blame somewhere else or on someone else so as not to be responsible for the outcome. But sometimes people don't look at it as an excuse, instead they convince themselves that what they are saying if fact.... regardless, the outcome is the same. With no forward motion, the world comes to a halt.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Most times, excuses are used to put the blame somewhere else or on someone else so as not to be responsible for the outcome. But sometimes people don't look at it as an excuse, instead they convince themselves that what they are saying if fact.... regardless, the outcome is the same. With no forward motion, the world comes to a halt.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you again Carol for a great review. Smiles right at you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Pam.
-You wrote a very good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You get across the feeling of cold
very well in the beginning, probably
because it is cold here in NJ!
-I like your line about "excuses are lies..."
-You do a good job giving examples of them,
and how they impact our mood.
-Very good description and comparison to
the lions and mice.
-Very good closing lines, as well.
-Very well done! Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Pam.
-You wrote a very good poem with
effective imagery and rhyme.
-You get across the feeling of cold
very well in the beginning, probably
because it is cold here in NJ!
-I like your line about "excuses are lies..."
-You do a good job giving examples of them,
and how they impact our mood.
-Very good description and comparison to
the lions and mice.
-Very good closing lines, as well.
-Very well done! Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Pam for your thorough and thoughtful and lovely review
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You are very welcome, Pam.
Comment from Sanku
I think most of s have used excused at some time or the other mainly to deflect the blame from ourselves .Falling into a rut and staying there is comfortable for many .well written..
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I think most of s have used excused at some time or the other mainly to deflect the blame from ourselves .Falling into a rut and staying there is comfortable for many .well written..
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you again for a lovely review
Comment from Barry Penfold
Well put together and I agree with your comments i.e when we make excuses we are just deluding ourselves. Thanks for sharing and some nice rhyming. Take care and have a great day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Well put together and I agree with your comments i.e when we make excuses we are just deluding ourselves. Thanks for sharing and some nice rhyming. Take care and have a great day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Barry for a great review
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This got my last six star. I enjoyed this immensely. I would not change a thing. The cold colors made us chilly. The lady in the water made us feel danger was involved. You pulled us in with the formula font that let us feel the danger of uniformity. Whether you knew all this or not, you and you alone created this. Bravo. Karen
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This got my last six star. I enjoyed this immensely. I would not change a thing. The cold colors made us chilly. The lady in the water made us feel danger was involved. You pulled us in with the formula font that let us feel the danger of uniformity. Whether you knew all this or not, you and you alone created this. Bravo. Karen
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Love this. Have experienced so many time living among the Navajo Blue Water is a good one in New Mexico. Reservation . Great people Great write Pam. Thanks for sharing.
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Love this. Have experienced so many time living among the Navajo Blue Water is a good one in New Mexico. Reservation . Great people Great write Pam. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
Oh ouch! That's not good at the end to drown in self-pity. But yes, excuses cause so many unwanted feelings. I enjoyed reading your poem. You did a great job formulating this with great rhymes.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Oh ouch! That's not good at the end to drown in self-pity. But yes, excuses cause so many unwanted feelings. I enjoyed reading your poem. You did a great job formulating this with great rhymes.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your thoughtful and lovely review
Comment from DonandVicki
I know people like this that make excuses and tend to blame others for their mistakes. I have used them to learn from, I try my best but there are times I am guilty as well. Both of your poems have made me think.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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I know people like this that make excuses and tend to blame others for their mistakes. I have used them to learn from, I try my best but there are times I am guilty as well. Both of your poems have made me think.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2024
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Thank you donandVicki
For a great review
