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Discrimination

A poem about Immigrant hatred.

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Comment from kahpot
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Very well said with a message for many to adhered too, I feel for the American people in the coming years, as I do for the rest of the world,
"We are one species, despite how we look or sound," if only we could make the leaders of the world understand this, an excellent read****kahpot

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Thank you. I believe that most politicians know and actually believe that. The problem is that saying that in public will probably not get you elected.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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As far as I can tell, the only ones who have the right to fuss about immigration are the American Indians. They were here first. Not us. We stole everything from them.
And we have been raping their land. We have no leg to stand on about people being here that don't belong.
You talk the truth. Karen

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Thank you Karen. The unpopular women who also bear the name of Karen do a disservice to the Karens who are absolute dolls and angels.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Immigration is an important subject to write about, as there is trouble brewing at Mar-a-Lago right now. Trump promised to eliminate the H1B Visa program which Elon Musk uses to hire the world's brightest minds and engineers. Musk met blowback and he very publicly called about 17% of Trump's base "contemptible fools and hateful, unrepentant racists" who should be removed from the Republican Party "root and stem". I guess he didn't get the memo.

These folks don't want immigration as they believe Musk's high-paying jobs should go to Americans. Can't say I disagree with that, but Elon Musk sure does. Perhaps that is due to the fact that he was once an illegal immigrant into the USA who has gone on to become the richest man in the world.

But those are the kinds of things related to immigration that do have to be talked about and a consensus reached and drop all the disgusting lies about Haitians eating the family pet.

That said, no country can support unlimited immigration and every political party knows that.

Anyway enough said. I think you have done a fine job with your poem and hopefully saner heads will prevail in the not too distant future.

Thank you for sharing. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Thank you Gloria. A point to consider. Elon's thoughts may be influenced by the fact that an immigrant might not be as insistent on the level of compensation as a natural citizen might be.
reply by Gloria .... on 29-Dec-2024
    Of course I know that. But the whole MAGA movement is based on not letting "illegal" immigrants lower the compensation for the job done. And what Trump is saying now is that it's okay for big tech to do that, but a farmer is not allowed to. If Trump is America First as he claims he is *cough* he would see the hypocrisy in his actions. Stop pretending Americans aren't educated enough to do these jobs, because that is just a bald-faced lie.

    I always chuckled when Trump hires his high-tech savvy waitresses to work at Mar-a-Lago. Are you kidding me? You can't find Americans who would love that job? Always great to hear from you. :)

Comment from Lana Marie
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Hatred is wrong all the way around. God is a loving God. His commandment is for us to love one another, so I appreciate your heart in your writing.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Thank you Lana, your kind expression touches me deeply.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Nomi.
-Your notes are appreciated, and I hope
that people who are impacted by the
immigration issue stay safe and keep their families together.
-A very good poem with effective imagery, rhyme, and message.
-A very good first verse gets the reader's attention when
describing the impact of discrimination.
-A very good line about hating "the place you came from."
-An excellent second verse showing how it backs
the candidate that 'vows to do the job."
-I agree that things are coming to a head, and
I hope and pray that
"Glorious blessings from above await us,
Gifts from a God who does not hate us."
-Thank you for sharing this piece.
-It is very meaningful and very well written.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2024
    Thank you my dear friend and consistent supporter. You are very much appreciated.
reply by Pam (respa) on 28-Dec-2024
    You are very welcome and are also appreciated. You have good words to share, my friend.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2024
    Bless you.
Comment from forestport12
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Many ways I agree with you. I think, however the media does a disservice, because it gives the wrong impression. I noticed how CBS for example never featured a report on the 300,000 missing and exploited children who came across border under the democratic guise of compassion only to have untold numbers sold into work or sex slavery. Pseudo compassion. I'm one who as a young man would see desperate people who hid in train box cars and would never disparage them, but prayed for them and gave them my change. Interesting that you mentioned heaven's door! It's because there is a wall around heaven according to the Jesus we both claim. I know you are smart and spiritual to know what Jesus called those try a different way to get in. Sometimes, we need show tough love to those who break our laws when sneaking in, then we can let border patrol do their job, the right way. Compassion shouldn't be a trade off, either. We shouldn't have a Chicago mayor taking funds from those in the city who need it and moving it to those who snuck inside our borders. Rewarding bad behavior. Don't you agree? I do agree with you that Trump or anyone else should not disparage Haitians and others who legally come to our cities, working hard and filling jobs that spoiled young generations want nothing to do with. I think, what happens now, going forward, we should all come to an understanding and work together to send more funds to other countries and missionaries, but we can agree to disagree. Appreciate you being willing to raise this issue on site and agree to the point where as Paul said, "Speak the truth in love." Sometimes love means making tough decisions too.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    Absolutely. I agree with much that you wrote also. Because I do accept the scriptures, I know that nothing will change for the better until politics and selfish gain are done away with. This is prophesied in scripture, it will take place after the battle of Armageddon and the destruction of Satan the Devil. He is the root cause of trouble on the Earth. His evil influence damages us all.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem about the problem we are facing with illegal aliens in our land. It is a sad problem, but we need to keep praying that the right thing will be done and keep praying for our new President coming in to do the right thing.Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    Thank you Teri. The cautionary thought is that there are really no easy answers to the complex problems that seem to be exploding across the globe. I fear that only God Almighty can permanently fix things.
Comment from Trina Layne
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You have some powerful reflections in this piece. Thanks for your passion and commitment to raising awareness about social ills like discrimination. However, this particular course will run until the Lord makes his return. Each person has to decide where he or she stands.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    My thoughts exactly. You and I are on the same page. The battle of Armageddon will put an end to Satan and the troubles he delights in causing.
Comment from Begin Again
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I can not believe that our great nation has stepped into new shoes that are walking backwards in time, turning our backs on everything we have fought to provide for every person in the United States and now it belongs to only a few - I pray that somehow this hypocrisy is stopped and "justice for all" withstands.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    Because I have strong faith in the people of this nation. I strongly believe that in time we will sort things out and emerge on the other side of this current mess.
Comment from lyenochka
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Great message in your well crafted and well rhymed poem, Nomi! I cannot watch the news for the next four years unless God changes the heart of the man who keeps inciting hatred and division in our country. May the Lord do a great work and change the leaders and Congress to return to enable people to love and respect one another!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    In my 81 years of life I have seen this country take a wrong step or two, so I have complete faith that the ship of state will regain its footing and we will once again become the nation we have been telling people we are.
reply by lyenochka on 27-Dec-2024
    Let's pray for that, Nomi. I get discouraged. I cannot bear to watch that man spew out his lies. May the Lord cause him to repent!
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2024
    As long as he keeps winning, there is little chance that he will change. The people that support him do so only because they think that he will give them what they selfishly want.