Lingering Twilight
a Lune poetic form23 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Melissa.
-You have written a good lune with a good topic.
-A very good first line sets the scene.
-You do a good job personifying the twilight
as it waits for dusk to settle.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Melissa.
-You have written a good lune with a good topic.
-A very good first line sets the scene.
-You do a good job personifying the twilight
as it waits for dusk to settle.
-A good entry; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hello Pam. Thank you so much!! I am grateful for your detailed review. So good of you to share your thoughts!
Melissa
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You are very welcome, Melissa.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Your words paint a beautiful picture of the setting sun in this lune. The picture illustrates your words nicely. I love the alliteration with the 'L' sounds, which pull the reader into your words. Best wishes in the contest. Merry Christmas and a blessed New Year. Carol
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Your words paint a beautiful picture of the setting sun in this lune. The picture illustrates your words nicely. I love the alliteration with the 'L' sounds, which pull the reader into your words. Best wishes in the contest. Merry Christmas and a blessed New Year. Carol
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you, thank you sweet Carol for your lovely review. I appreciate the detailed comments. Hugs.
Melissa
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You're welcome, Melissa. I enjoyed your lune, and I hope it does well in the contest. Blessings. Carol
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Beautifully presented and captured in your lune poem - this transitional stage between day and night when the scenery seems to take on an eerie and quite magical hue. Well done and good luck, Melissa! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Beautifully presented and captured in your lune poem - this transitional stage between day and night when the scenery seems to take on an eerie and quite magical hue. Well done and good luck, Melissa! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much Debbie. I appreciate your lovely comments.
Melissa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Always so gorgeous, your work, Melissa. You use simple words but weave them in such a way that they create magic. This one is especially captivating. Good luck with it in the contest. It should easily end up in the winner's circle. Xoxo
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Always so gorgeous, your work, Melissa. You use simple words but weave them in such a way that they create magic. This one is especially captivating. Good luck with it in the contest. It should easily end up in the winner's circle. Xoxo
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hey there Rachelle. Thanks so much for your encouragement. I really appreciate your thoughts on this one. You are one of my favorite people and writer and I hope to read your work soon. Hugs!!
Melissa
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I've had to take a bit of a hiatus bur will hopefully be back in Jan. Enjoy the holidays
Comment from Mark D. R.
Melissa,
Nicely penned Lune poem. You captured that twilight moment we all want to see (and feel!).
Your artwork's colors sync nicely with your verse.
Mark
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Melissa,
Nicely penned Lune poem. You captured that twilight moment we all want to see (and feel!).
Your artwork's colors sync nicely with your verse.
Mark
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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hey Mark. Thanks so much!!! So appreciated, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
This is actually my favorite time of day when the busyness of day slowly surrenders to the calmness of night. The words and lovely illustration blend well to create a lune. Shoujd do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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This is actually my favorite time of day when the busyness of day slowly surrenders to the calmness of night. The words and lovely illustration blend well to create a lune. Shoujd do well in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you June. I also savor a lovely sunset, the quiet shadows and the purple tones that hide within the nooks and crannies of my garden... even in the wintertime. I hope you are well!!
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those twilight hours are always magical in the morning or at night, this picture is gorgeous, the lingering lasts only moments before dusk turns to night here, much enjoyed Melissa, a wonderful Lune, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Those twilight hours are always magical in the morning or at night, this picture is gorgeous, the lingering lasts only moments before dusk turns to night here, much enjoyed Melissa, a wonderful Lune, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Hey Dolly. Thanks!! I always feel so attuned to twilight. I appreciate your lovely review!!
Melissa
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written LUNE for the contest. I WANT TO WISH YOU A VERY GOOD WEEKEND AND I WISH YOU THE VERY BEST IN THE CONTEST. MAY YOU HAVE A LOVELY WEEKEND AND MAY YOU HAVE A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS. PATRICIA.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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This is a very well written LUNE for the contest. I WANT TO WISH YOU A VERY GOOD WEEKEND AND I WISH YOU THE VERY BEST IN THE CONTEST. MAY YOU HAVE A LOVELY WEEKEND AND MAY YOU HAVE A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS. PATRICIA.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you sweet Patricia. May you have a lovely and blessed Christmas too.
Melissa
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is nice and all but doesn't Twilight and Dusk mean the same thing? You end with the beginning and if that is what you intended to do then you have achieved a great contest entry. I love the artwork as it adds a beautiful sunrise or sunset take your pick.
Jesse
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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This is nice and all but doesn't Twilight and Dusk mean the same thing? You end with the beginning and if that is what you intended to do then you have achieved a great contest entry. I love the artwork as it adds a beautiful sunrise or sunset take your pick.
Jesse
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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thank you Jesse..., yes, they do mean the same.. I will revisit this one to edit. Much appreciated.
Melissa
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Glad I could help.
Happy holidays!
Jesse
Comment from RodG
Your Lune captures the atmosphere of the photo perfectly.
I like how you personify twilight as a figure lingering in the shadows. Your image flows smoothly from line to line. Rod
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Your Lune captures the atmosphere of the photo perfectly.
I like how you personify twilight as a figure lingering in the shadows. Your image flows smoothly from line to line. Rod
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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thank you very much Rod! Have a lovely Christmas!!
Melissa