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Expectations

versus acceptance

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Comment from Peter Jarvis
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Your poem powerfully captures the emotional struggle between parental expectations and the need for acceptance. It's a poignant reflection on how these dynamics can shape and impact both children and parents as they navigate life's journey.

The contrast between expectations and acceptance is beautifully articulated, highlighting the importance of allowing children to grow into their authentic selves. Your closing lines offer a hopeful and necessary call for parents to let go of rigid expectations in favor of love and understanding.

Thank you for sharing this deeply meaningful piece inspired by your friend's experience. It resonates on many levels and serves as a gentle reminder of the power of acceptance.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024

Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Jesse,
A wonderful statement for everyone. Acceptance is what most people want. High expectations of a person sets one up for failure. I'm sorry about your friend not being able to be himself around his parents.
Excellent, Jesse.
I hope you have a blessed Christmas.
Blessings,
Cindy

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 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
    Hello Cindy. Yes, high expectations sets up a person for failure. I agree wholeheartedly. Acceptance is hard to come by when the parents are judgemental and discriminatory. My friend's parents have these traits. Thank you for your kind words.
    Thanks for the blessings, my friend.
    Jesse
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I must admit I enjoy my mature children, they are well educated and have developed their own view points and have followed us in the faith, so we are friends and can enjoy their company as sophisticated and knowledgeable adults, beautifully written Jesse, blessings Roy

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
    Thanks, Roy, for your encouraging review. Your mature children sound much older than my friend who is still in their 20s and developing their lifestyle. I am happy you share and enjoy each other's company. Thanks for your kind words.
    Thank you for your blessing.
    Jesse
reply by royowen on 12-Dec-2024
    My pleasure