Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Miracles - Chap 10"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Tim Margetts
Knew it, knew it. (That place where Donatelli is holed up got me interested the moment you added it LOL)
The part with the Judge was well done, I love the way you brought in that he isn't as in control as he thinks.
I just know you are going to bring him down and can't wait to find out how.
This story is, like all good crime stories, a spider web that allows you to see the threads, but not yet the way they will all be drawn in, and I fully expect some twists and turns I can't predict are waiting on the horizon.
Tim x
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Knew it, knew it. (That place where Donatelli is holed up got me interested the moment you added it LOL)
The part with the Judge was well done, I love the way you brought in that he isn't as in control as he thinks.
I just know you are going to bring him down and can't wait to find out how.
This story is, like all good crime stories, a spider web that allows you to see the threads, but not yet the way they will all be drawn in, and I fully expect some twists and turns I can't predict are waiting on the horizon.
Tim x
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thank you so much, Tim. Just finished the next chapter before I have to head to the hospital with my son. Hope you enjoy it.
Smiles, Carol
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I do hope your son is ok and nothing serious.
Just about to dig into Chapter 11 of yours
Tim x
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Carol, I really like how you weave the lives of the fictional Tony Soprano with the very real Judge Doyle (what am I saying? this is fiction I'm reviewing, lol!). It adds texture and a human side to the judge. We all like to watch TV and we all have our "heroes".
Learning more about the town with this chapter. Thanks for filling us in and setting the scene.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Carol, I really like how you weave the lives of the fictional Tony Soprano with the very real Judge Doyle (what am I saying? this is fiction I'm reviewing, lol!). It adds texture and a human side to the judge. We all like to watch TV and we all have our "heroes".
Learning more about the town with this chapter. Thanks for filling us in and setting the scene.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Pam. Even the bad guys are human and have another side to them, unfortunately they don't share it much. I am thankful that I could draw you into the story and into is character. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Doyle is a disgusting character, but somehow, I've forgotten how Margaret was connected to him. I thought she died because she was related to Jenna and Eleanor who he blames for his imprisonment.
I'm glad Danni was familiar with the biker bar and old abandoned house. They are moving closer to Matthew, even though he has lost his memory. If Eleanor and Danni find him, he will be surrounded by three ghosts.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Doyle is a disgusting character, but somehow, I've forgotten how Margaret was connected to him. I thought she died because she was related to Jenna and Eleanor who he blames for his imprisonment.
I'm glad Danni was familiar with the biker bar and old abandoned house. They are moving closer to Matthew, even though he has lost his memory. If Eleanor and Danni find him, he will be surrounded by three ghosts.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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That was part of it, but Doyle was having an affair with Margaret, and when he wanted to get back at Eleanor and Margaret, he kidnapped Megan (her daughter) and was going to have her sold in human trafficking.
Danni doesn't realize that she might have a clue yet, but she has set Eleanor's curious mind in motion.
Thanks for the awesome review and your continuing support.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
So, Doyle raped Jenna and got her pregnant. What a creep of a father for her child. Everyone doesn't yet seem to be too worried about Donatelli, although Eleanor is becoming anxious since she can't sense him anywhere at all. I was hoping she could be drawn to him when he regains consciousness, but since he doesn't know who he is, he can't think of her.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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So, Doyle raped Jenna and got her pregnant. What a creep of a father for her child. Everyone doesn't yet seem to be too worried about Donatelli, although Eleanor is becoming anxious since she can't sense him anywhere at all. I was hoping she could be drawn to him when he regains consciousness, but since he doesn't know who he is, he can't think of her.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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No, he hired someone to do it. He's in prison so he couldn't do it. He just wanted to upset another apple cart. He's so cold that it meant nothing to him. Yes, Donatelli needs his memory back soon.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Doyle's need for power comes through clearly. I couldn't help but feel the tension when he interacts with Rossi. The mix of menace and arrogance in those moments makes Doyle such a fascinating character. Plus, the eerie mystery surrounding Rebecca's family is definitely something I want to know more about! Keep it up, you're doing great!
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Doyle's need for power comes through clearly. I couldn't help but feel the tension when he interacts with Rossi. The mix of menace and arrogance in those moments makes Doyle such a fascinating character. Plus, the eerie mystery surrounding Rebecca's family is definitely something I want to know more about! Keep it up, you're doing great!
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Michael. I am really loving the depth of the characters in this novel and it makes me happy when I know others are feeling it too. I appreciate your reviews and comments.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
As usual an exquisite offering. I really enjoyed this chapter, as it is giving us the right amount of funny combined with enough suspense to make us wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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As usual an exquisite offering. I really enjoyed this chapter, as it is giving us the right amount of funny combined with enough suspense to make us wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Oh, Iza...You make me so happy. Thank you for enjoying the book and always supporting me. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
That doesn't sound good for Rebecca. I'm glad Eleanor and Danni are on it, and I hope this leads them to Donatelli. So, is someone actually curtailing Doyle's control a bit? Who is Rossi, and who does he work for? Rossi's got it right that Doyle is disgusting. Good chapter. Hugs! Carol
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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That doesn't sound good for Rebecca. I'm glad Eleanor and Danni are on it, and I hope this leads them to Donatelli. So, is someone actually curtailing Doyle's control a bit? Who is Rossi, and who does he work for? Rossi's got it right that Doyle is disgusting. Good chapter. Hugs! Carol
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Vince Rossi is the attorney for the mob... Doyle thinks he's in control of his little world but someone is always watching with their finger on the trigger. Thanks so much for the comments and review.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Thank you. You might want to add Rossi to the list of characters.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
Another awesome chapter to your #1 best selling book. I can't wait until you get more chapters written. You leave your reader hanging on the edge as usual.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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Carol,
Another awesome chapter to your #1 best selling book. I can't wait until you get more chapters written. You leave your reader hanging on the edge as usual.
Great job my friend.
Cecilia
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2024
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I can't wait till I get more chapters written either. LOL It takes so much time and money, but it's worth it when I see the finished chapter. Thanks so much, Cecelia.
Smiles, Carol
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You're welcome my friend
Cecilia
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Carol,
You are correct. It does take time and money. I never realized how expensive it can be.
Are you going to be writing when you go on vacation? It negates being on vacation if you are writing. You my friend will do what is best for you.
Cecilia.