Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

I loved this fifty word flash, Carol. They aren't easy to write and you did great. Too bad there wasn't a contest to put it in. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day.

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thanks Marilyn... I can't imagine someone who has professed to love someone forever and sends a DEar GirlFried letter. What a coward! And I would hope karma would come back to bite him.
Smiles, Carol

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

That's happened to one of our sweet writers here. He didn't even bother to write a letter! I think those types of womanizers should have all their devastated lovers take some kind of revenge on them....But that's another kind of story! You told it well in 50 words.

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 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

I know that even those who meant it when they said their love was forever can have a change of heart, but have the courage to talk with the person and try to explain. A "Dear Girlfriend" letter is beyond cruel. thanks for reading.
Smiles, Carol

reply by lyenochka on 16-Oct-2024

Worse is the breakup by text!