Lamentations
Lamentations of a lost love.23 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
So beautiful and creative how you relate the cry and grief of love lost to the willow tree. The picture adds to the understanding of the poem. Well done, dear Donandvicki for sharing this passionate piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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So beautiful and creative how you relate the cry and grief of love lost to the willow tree. The picture adds to the understanding of the poem. Well done, dear Donandvicki for sharing this passionate piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your generous review. Don
Comment from Janet Foor
Lamentations is a lovely 5/7/5 poem for the contest. Nice personification of the weeping Willows and nice alliteration as well.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Lamentations is a lovely 5/7/5 poem for the contest. Nice personification of the weeping Willows and nice alliteration as well.
Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Your reviews mean so much to me, Thank you Janet. Don
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. I like the way you personified the weeping willow to make it cry real tears. A beautiful sentiment. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry contest. I like the way you personified the weeping willow to make it cry real tears. A beautiful sentiment. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much Marilyn for the kind review.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Nicely written 5-7-5 and I particularly like the image of the weeping willow tree. It graphically sets the "tenor" of the poem. The description of line 2 leads perfectly to the last line. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Nicely written 5-7-5 and I particularly like the image of the weeping willow tree. It graphically sets the "tenor" of the poem. The description of line 2 leads perfectly to the last line. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much Robert.
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You are very welcome. Well done.
Comment from lyenochka
This is a moving poem and the poem transitions from the personified weeping willow to the grieving of the narrator. It has a haiku feel to it. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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This is a moving poem and the poem transitions from the personified weeping willow to the grieving of the narrator. It has a haiku feel to it. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Ooooh! VERY cool 5-7-5 coupled with THE most perfect photo to highlight and bring even more meaning to these already eloquent words. Best of luck to you in the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. I hope you do well with this in the polls. xo
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Ooooh! VERY cool 5-7-5 coupled with THE most perfect photo to highlight and bring even more meaning to these already eloquent words. Best of luck to you in the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. I hope you do well with this in the polls. xo
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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You are so very kind Rachelle. Don
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I'm just honest about what I read. xoxo
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Indeed, thank you Rachelle.
Comment from nomi338
Weeping willows weep for me. Grief and misery is all I can see. Man has become his own worse enemy. He is in need of a healing remedy. Perhaps he should approach heaven's throne on bended knee.
Good write, it inspired this spontaneous response.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Weeping willows weep for me. Grief and misery is all I can see. Man has become his own worse enemy. He is in need of a healing remedy. Perhaps he should approach heaven's throne on bended knee.
Good write, it inspired this spontaneous response.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you Nomi, your reviews mean alot to me. Don
Comment from jake cosmos aller
good entry for the contest. I like the interplay between the lines. the image chosen nicely complements the poem's meaning. I like the last line the best as it sums up the poem.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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good entry for the contest. I like the interplay between the lines. the image chosen nicely complements the poem's meaning. I like the last line the best as it sums up the poem.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much, Jake for the kind review.
Comment from Sarah Probe 1
many thanks for such a mesmerising poem, powerful and dramatic at the same time, especially metaphorical a way that describes human feelings portrayed through the nature's force, it's a very rare skill, that you own as a poet and i congratulate you i encourage you to promote this poem for the contest,
good luck !
Sarah
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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many thanks for such a mesmerising poem, powerful and dramatic at the same time, especially metaphorical a way that describes human feelings portrayed through the nature's force, it's a very rare skill, that you own as a poet and i congratulate you i encourage you to promote this poem for the contest,
good luck !
Sarah
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Your review and kind words has touched my heart. I would like to be a fan of yours as well. Don
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thank you so much 💎🤍🩵💕
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Thank you Sarah.
Comment from Begin Again
Lots of emotions in so few words.... Definitely touches the heart. The weeping willow frieves with her as she cries with a broken heart. Wonderfully written. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Lots of emotions in so few words.... Definitely touches the heart. The weeping willow frieves with her as she cries with a broken heart. Wonderfully written. Good luck in the contest.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much Carol.