Spirited Justice
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Comment from Jacob1395
You definitely know how to leave your readers wanting more, Carol. I'm desperate to find out what's going to happen next now, especially with the tension ticking up a notch. That final scene was so tense, and the dialogue between the characters was really well done. An excellent piece once again, I really enjoyed it.
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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You definitely know how to leave your readers wanting more, Carol. I'm desperate to find out what's going to happen next now, especially with the tension ticking up a notch. That final scene was so tense, and the dialogue between the characters was really well done. An excellent piece once again, I really enjoyed it.
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Now that's exactly what I needed to hear. Thank you! There hasn't been a lot of interaction with the three bad guys so I hoped this made them real to the reader. Now Imust get Donateli and Garth on the same page and then look out.... lots of action as we begin to wrap this story up. As you've probably learned about my writing by now... nothing goes out easy. LOL Thanks again.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This pulled me in right away with its suspense! I loved the tension between the characters especially with Garth. The plot twists had me hooked. This is well written as usual. I'm excited to see where this goes next!
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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This pulled me in right away with its suspense! I loved the tension between the characters especially with Garth. The plot twists had me hooked. This is well written as usual. I'm excited to see where this goes next!
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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We are getting close to wrapping this one up, Michael, but be assured there is much more action before it happens. I thank you for continuing to read and to review. I appreciate the comments as always. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol