Reminiscing
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Chapter 2 Steven"A collection of short stories
34 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
Isn't it great to look back and remember those magical moments that can still bring happiness all these years later. For you, and for us who get to relive them with you. Thanks for sharing.
As I placed our order at the Arby's counter, I repeated(ly) asked Steven, . . .
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Isn't it great to look back and remember those magical moments that can still bring happiness all these years later. For you, and for us who get to relive them with you. Thanks for sharing.
As I placed our order at the Arby's counter, I repeated(ly) asked Steven, . . .
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I honestly believe the 'ly' was there and gremlins came in and stole it. I appreciate the help and the kind review.
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LOL. I know how you feel about the gremlins. They either mess things up, or I just read right through my own mistakes.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed your story. Steven got his curly fries. The story was funny that he prayed for the curly fries. My boys were like that when they were little. Well written. Very nice job.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed your story. Steven got his curly fries. The story was funny that he prayed for the curly fries. My boys were like that when they were little. Well written. Very nice job.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for understanding.
Comment from estory
This is a cute little parable that reminds us that sometimes, it's the little things in life. And it also shows that sometimes God can use these littlelest of moments to articulate that he cares about us. estory
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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This is a cute little parable that reminds us that sometimes, it's the little things in life. And it also shows that sometimes God can use these littlelest of moments to articulate that he cares about us. estory
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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God sure does. He cares about even the small things in our lives. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a really good story, Barb. Young children don't have the maturity to offer up meaningful prayers, but it is good that they get practice talking with God.
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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This is a really good story, Barb. Young children don't have the maturity to offer up meaningful prayers, but it is good that they get practice talking with God.
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I was happy Steven thought about going to God, but truthfully not happy with the results. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The things they do when they are little. I would have taken some of those fries in recompense for the fact it was your money that got those fries, third are yours. And then, I would have given the other third to Andrew because God cannot eat his third.
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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The things they do when they are little. I would have taken some of those fries in recompense for the fact it was your money that got those fries, third are yours. And then, I would have given the other third to Andrew because God cannot eat his third.
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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LOL I didn't think of it. I was not happy he got curly fries, and a little shocked. Thank you for the kind review.
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My mind works like a flash. My kids did lots of weird stuff, They did come out of me you know! haha Karen
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Amazing how when things work out, our age changes the way we interpret that outcome... Oh, for the innocent viewpoint once again! :) ;) A wonderful addition to your recorded memories, Barbara, that one will definitely lend you a smile when the world gets 'foggy' years from now! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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LOL!! Amazing how when things work out, our age changes the way we interpret that outcome... Oh, for the innocent viewpoint once again! :) ;) A wonderful addition to your recorded memories, Barbara, that one will definitely lend you a smile when the world gets 'foggy' years from now! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
I enjoy reading about real life family situation, significant glimpses of the lfe. This was a cute story. He is happy to believe that his prayer was answered...Thank you for sharing..
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I enjoy reading about real life family situation, significant glimpses of the lfe. This was a cute story. He is happy to believe that his prayer was answered...Thank you for sharing..
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Kids are always thinking about ways to get what they want, lol! This is a fun snapshot of a moment in the life of your family. Thanks for sharing it with us.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Kids are always thinking about ways to get what they want, lol! This is a fun snapshot of a moment in the life of your family. Thanks for sharing it with us.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from royowen
I can remember years ago that I was thinking of praying to God about some minor thing, and then I then I thought I wouldn't bother God about something minor, and He broke into my thoughts, saying "You are my child, if it matters to you, it matters to me." God does things in seasonal times in our lives, when we are unsure of something, He is sure, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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I can remember years ago that I was thinking of praying to God about some minor thing, and then I then I thought I wouldn't bother God about something minor, and He broke into my thoughts, saying "You are my child, if it matters to you, it matters to me." God does things in seasonal times in our lives, when we are unsure of something, He is sure, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. Well, I am not sure whether that was an answer to prayer or the luck of the draw. Whichever it was, his faith was probably strengthened. And I am sure God has a sense of humour.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Lol. Well, I am not sure whether that was an answer to prayer or the luck of the draw. Whichever it was, his faith was probably strengthened. And I am sure God has a sense of humour.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I know God has a sense of humor.