Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is very well written and I enjoyed listening to it very much. It flows very well when it is read aloud and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a pleasant evening and may God bless you. Patricia .

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-May-2024

Thank you so much, Patricia! I'm so sorry for the late reply, I'm just catching up on comments! Xo

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

We're still getting frost at night - so winter is trying hard to keep spring away. But I will wait patiently for the lilies - they're pushing through, but not warm enough to bloom yet. Great personification.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-May-2024

Thank you so much, June! I'm so sorry for the late reply! Xo

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I really enjoyed the progression of your poem from the physical lingering of the season of winter that keeps hanging on to the emotional winter of grieving that lingers in the soul. Beautifully done!

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-May-2024

Thank you so much, Helen! I'm so sorry for the late reply, I'm just catching up on comments! Xo

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I remember some winters back in the Midwest. They did seem to drag on and on. It caused some depression which quickly left when spring finally arrived. I enjoyed reading this poem. I am so happy you're posting more often again. Thank you.

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 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 01-May-2024

Barbara, thanks so much. I'm just catching up on comments, I'm so sorry for the late response! Xo