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Heart Crafted Poems - 2022

Viewing comments for Chapter 94 "Too many spirits"
Musings of an old man - 2022

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Comment from Abby Wilson-hand
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i love what you have written here hope I could have given you a six but all out of the sixes. Great way of a display of character in your write keep it up you'll do well in the rankings

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
    Thanks Abby
Comment from Aussie
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Couldn't have said it better. If you drink, don't drive. I have never understood why people have to get tanked to enjoy a party. Alcohol is poison to our system, it lifts you up, gone are your inhibition's, making a fool of yourself with a mighty headache.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
    Never been truer words state, thanks for the validation have an awesome Week before Christmas.
reply by Aussie on 18-Dec-2022
    Happy Christmas JLR!
Comment from Gloria ....
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I think you have done a fine job with this, J. I'm not sure I completely understand the form but your wit shine through, and the repeating rhyme has caused some interesting word choices.

Very well done, indeed.

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
    How kind of you Gloria! This formulaic poem was quite the challenge for certain. But I loosen up and had fun with it. Have an awesome week building up to Christmas.
Comment from lyenochka
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Lol. Thanks for sharing this humorous poem. At first, I thought you did the poem in the picture and was impressed with your formatting abilities. I liked all your rhymes and fun scenario. After 2021's lockdowns, we are all anxious to get out and socialize more.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
    Smiles For certain!
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This was my first encounter with a Raccontino poetry form, and it was quite enjoyable and fun to read. I read it straight through the first time, then went back and read the rhyming lines the second time, and the other lines the third time. This poem required real thought. You did a spectacular job. Plus, it's humorous.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
    Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Very funny. Could see this being a skit on a British comedy show. Very festive and tongue in cheek naughty. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for posting and Merry Christmas.
Gretchen

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 18-Dec-2022
    Gretchen, thank you! Merriest of Christmas celebrations to you as well!
Comment from Boogienights
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Hahaha...it's the season I think. Nothing wrong with a little bit of partying, as long as you're able to function the next day. :) I love this humorous poem, thanks for the smile..:)

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
    Smiles back at you!😉😉😉
Comment from royowen
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I loved the naughty ending to this fabulous poem my friend, you've managed to make a very good ending to this great raccontino you've woven a great tale with the "unrhymed" second lines of the poem, which I think makes the poem flow better, great job Jim. Blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
    Thank you dear friend! be well!
reply by royowen on 17-Dec-2022
    You too Jim
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You might want to change the title to: (Too many spirits) as it is not grammatically correct as it is. Oh dear, too much partying has resulted in embarrassment here, a fun post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
    Thanks much!
Comment from Lilly Flowers
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There is quite a lot of complexity that went into this form and I commend you for taking on the challenge. I hope the protagonist learned his lesson. Partying and then going to church the next day were not the wisest of choices, haha. Hugs, Lilly

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2022
    Smiles and hugs back