Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 100 "Pumpkin Patch"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I enjoyed your poem of a family outing, with each person mentioned. I could feel their joy in the season and in being together. The picture was an excellent complement to the story.
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I enjoyed your poem of a family outing, with each person mentioned. I could feel their joy in the season and in being together. The picture was an excellent complement to the story.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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Thank you Verna!
Comment from Gloria ....
I think you have done a fine job of furthering along the poetic expression of this work of art.
I particularly enjoyed the plump pumpkins plunked alliteration long after the corn.
I find this an imagery filled delight perfect for the harvest of autumn.
Excellent contribution to the club.
Gloria
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I think you have done a fine job of furthering along the poetic expression of this work of art.
I particularly enjoyed the plump pumpkins plunked alliteration long after the corn.
I find this an imagery filled delight perfect for the harvest of autumn.
Excellent contribution to the club.
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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Gloria, Thanks 🙏
Comment from royowen
An excellently imaginative answer to this picture this prompt friend Jim. Your versatility is shining through in this excellent abab slightly varied metered interpretation of the prompt, well done my friend, blessings Roy
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An excellently imaginative answer to this picture this prompt friend Jim. Your versatility is shining through in this excellent abab slightly varied metered interpretation of the prompt, well done my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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Roy, thanks 🙏🙏
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Welcome
Comment from Mrs. KT
Smiles all around, JLR!
Loved every line and stanza of your exceptionally well-crafted rhyming ekphrastic verse!
Brought back many memories of long ago.
Genuine fun and happiness...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
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Smiles all around, JLR!
Loved every line and stanza of your exceptionally well-crafted rhyming ekphrastic verse!
Brought back many memories of long ago.
Genuine fun and happiness...
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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Diane, thanks so much! 🙏🙏
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a delightful picture, and you have chosen beautiful words to describe it. Makes me feel nostalgic, remembering days of childhood and bringing in the harvest on the farm. I like the lines: "Our harvest complete - knowing we are blest, we'll say a prayer and give God a toast."
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What a delightful picture, and you have chosen beautiful words to describe it. Makes me feel nostalgic, remembering days of childhood and bringing in the harvest on the farm. I like the lines: "Our harvest complete - knowing we are blest, we'll say a prayer and give God a toast."
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2022
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Thanks Anne, I appreciate your review and comments.
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You are welcome
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Thanks Anne, I appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Sally Law
Lovely offering for this picture this prompt, dear J. Suzy is my sister too and loves pumpkins! How about that. I enjoyed your use of alliteration with plump pumpkins plunked! A delightful read. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
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Lovely offering for this picture this prompt, dear J. Suzy is my sister too and loves pumpkins! How about that. I enjoyed your use of alliteration with plump pumpkins plunked! A delightful read. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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All smiles in our world Ms. Sally! Bouncing best wishes back ....
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your club response, JLR. I enjoyed
reading it. Your words read smoothly with some rhymes and
created great imagery. I liked how you used old fashioned names
of the family pictured. The ending was great as God created all.
i wouldn't capitalize the 'a' in PA--Pa.
Thanks for participating, Jan
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You did a great job with your club response, JLR. I enjoyed
reading it. Your words read smoothly with some rhymes and
created great imagery. I liked how you used old fashioned names
of the family pictured. The ending was great as God created all.
i wouldn't capitalize the 'a' in PA--Pa.
Thanks for participating, Jan
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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Good catch Jan, fun photo to write about!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello JLR a terrific Tuesday to you, I hope this finds you well, I enjoyed your spiritual poetry. It had a nice flow and rhymes to it. your poetry club contribution should be well received. Good job!
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Hello JLR a terrific Tuesday to you, I hope this finds you well, I enjoyed your spiritual poetry. It had a nice flow and rhymes to it. your poetry club contribution should be well received. Good job!
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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My Friend, happy Tuesday back to you also, thanks much!
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Pumpkin Patch, presented with three ABAB-rhymed quatrains, takes the readers to this neat time of gathering up the harvest bounty. Fun stuff.
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This poem, Pumpkin Patch, presented with three ABAB-rhymed quatrains, takes the readers to this neat time of gathering up the harvest bounty. Fun stuff.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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Bill, thank you!
Comment from Ricky1024
As I was reading this it reminds me of how they use pumpkins and actually propel them for long distances.
Maybe in the future it'll propelling them to try to hit targets a couple hundred yards away?
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Well written and an appropriate writing for this fall holiday.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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As I was reading this it reminds me of how they use pumpkins and actually propel them for long distances.
Maybe in the future it'll propelling them to try to hit targets a couple hundred yards away?
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Well written and an appropriate writing for this fall holiday.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2022
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perhaps that is why the gourd is called squash LOL...