Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
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Comment from Michaela Moore
From the image you chose down to your last word, this was a delightful journey through a fun poem! Just as you extoll the ingredients to the hash, you also extoll many ingredients of poetry. Juxtaposing both of those things seamlessly together heightens this little poem into an even more brilliant writing. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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From the image you chose down to your last word, this was a delightful journey through a fun poem! Just as you extoll the ingredients to the hash, you also extoll many ingredients of poetry. Juxtaposing both of those things seamlessly together heightens this little poem into an even more brilliant writing. Excellent job!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Smiling back with thanks!
Comment from MissMerri
You have followed the rules and written a funny and clever little poem. I thought it was impressive that you could do all this with only five lines in your poem. It always takes me much longer to arrive. ;p Good luck in the contest. MM
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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You have followed the rules and written a funny and clever little poem. I thought it was impressive that you could do all this with only five lines in your poem. It always takes me much longer to arrive. ;p Good luck in the contest. MM
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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MissMeri, thank you for the good wishes!
Comment from Michael Cassar
Love ð??? it. My mouth began watering as I inhaled the aroma of scrambled eggs and hash. It felt like the poet was invited to sing the rhyming poem with a melodic sound to it. I hope the stash been hidden includes a stack of blueberry pancakes. Humorous and enjoyed the Tricky rhyme. Good luck
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Love ð??? it. My mouth began watering as I inhaled the aroma of scrambled eggs and hash. It felt like the poet was invited to sing the rhyming poem with a melodic sound to it. I hope the stash been hidden includes a stack of blueberry pancakes. Humorous and enjoyed the Tricky rhyme. Good luck
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thanks for the validation, sir! I appreciate it.
Comment from Liz Westfall
I think you took the prompt in a fun direction. I could picture a guy cooking up some breakfast at a diner or in his home. Good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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I think you took the prompt in a fun direction. I could picture a guy cooking up some breakfast at a diner or in his home. Good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thanks, Liz!
Comment from royowen
This is one of the harder types of contests to negotiate. Mono rhyme in this contest has to be a common one consistent with the rules, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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This is one of the harder types of contests to negotiate. Mono rhyme in this contest has to be a common one consistent with the rules, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Thanks, friend!
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Well done
Comment from dragonpoet
This poem follows the contest rules well while being witty describing the making of breakfast. It seems from the artwork in is on a British Naval ship.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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This poem follows the contest rules well while being witty describing the making of breakfast. It seems from the artwork in is on a British Naval ship.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Hi Joan, I do believe it is a galley onboard a ship.
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That's what HMS means. Her Majesty's Service, the British version of USS for American Navy Ships.
Joan
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You used those words well. And I like the picture. My deceased husband loved cooking breakfast. He could cook a great breakfast. Breakfast was his favourite meal of the day. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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You used those words well. And I like the picture. My deceased husband loved cooking breakfast. He could cook a great breakfast. Breakfast was his favourite meal of the day. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Smiles!
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Smiles back to you.
Comment from jessizero
That was indeed a tricky challenge, and you nailed it! It didn't sound awkward at all. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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That was indeed a tricky challenge, and you nailed it! It didn't sound awkward at all. Thank you for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2022
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Hi and thanks, Jessi!
Comment from Sally Law
This is just so fun for the, shall I dare to say, most unusual prompt ever! You did a great job, mystery poet, and the end rhymes are perfection. So well presented too. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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This is just so fun for the, shall I dare to say, most unusual prompt ever! You did a great job, mystery poet, and the end rhymes are perfection. So well presented too. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Smiles of appreciation!
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Most welcome! :))
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:)) xo
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Mystery Author. You told
a great little story using the required words and rhymes. I'm
wondering if it was allowed to add 's' to the word orange. Your
picture paired perfectly with your words.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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I enjoyed your fun contest entry, Mystery Author. You told
a great little story using the required words and rhymes. I'm
wondering if it was allowed to add 's' to the word orange. Your
picture paired perfectly with your words.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2022
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Thanks Jan, I didn't want to risk being disqualified.
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you wrote oranges not orange????