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Final Jeopardy

Make sure you final answer is in the form of a question.

29 total reviews 
Comment from Shirley McLain
Exceptional
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What a great story to read. You did an excellent job without error. I thought the storyline showed lots of imagination. Have a wonderful evening. Shirley

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    Shirley, thank you for the six stars! I am pleased you enjoyed the story. Terry.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This story is totally imaginative. As I read, I wondered where the story was going and how it would end. I enjoyed Kevin's realistic questions, and Alex's unhelpful answers that left Kevin wondering about his life choices. This story is fiction, but it has a powerful message. Well done.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Thank you very much for reading and for your insightful review! Terry.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Exceptional
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Again with the leading one way and the ending another way. I loved it. I could hear Alec Trebek perfectly. You bring your characters to life so well. Fun and fabulous story. Gretchen

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Gretchen, thank you for the six stars! I am very pleased you could hear Alex's voice because I heard it all the time I was writing and editing it. Thank you for reading. Terry.
reply by GWHARGIS on 10-Oct-2022
    Not only could I hear him, I could see those snarky looks he gets. Especially when he told the guy to please stop asking questions. Lol. You did awesome.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2022
    That is very cool!
Comment from Ulla
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Hehehe, Terry, yeah I wonder how any of us would have answered those questions. I read it with great interest. I have to say it was very well
written. I was riveted all way through. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Ulla, thank you for reading and for your kind review. Terry.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I enjoyed reading. I'm curious how we would answer our three greatest loves and then if children, count as one or each child counts individually. Hmm Thank you for sharing.

"Kevin, Move toward the light." (lower case 'm' on 'move')

"Kevin, Welcome, to Final Jeopardy; I am Alex Trebek, your host." (lower case 'w' on 'welcome')

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Barbara, thank for reading, and the edits! And you asked a good question. Terry.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Exceptional
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This is wonderful and so true! We need to test ourselves and the relationships we love so dearly. I enjoyed reading this thoroughly and had a good time, my friend. Jeopardy was a great show with Alex Trebek and I loved to hear his quips about the answers he would pose to the contestants. I loved your final sentences with your wife waking you up in your recliner saying that Jeopardy had finished an hour ago. A fun frolic through your mind.
Jesse

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Jesse, thank you for the six stars! I love your review, and I am glad you enjoyed the story. Terry.
reply by Jesse James Doty on 09-Oct-2022
    Yes, you are definitely getting better as a writer, my friend!
    Jesse
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Thank you.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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Made a mistake in '69 while looking to buy a '63 Vette when I found it next to a returned '68. The older version was priced @ $3200 the other @ $5800. I thought the new mail generation was ugly but side by side it but old Betsy to shame so I asked what's new t-top cost. Six hundred more he said and so I left that night with my first GM car and had the door fall off when I pulled at home. Seemssomelaborer had left to door pins off. The car was jinx but that for another day.Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Tom, thank you for reading my story. You got a dang good story about the Vette. Terry.
Comment from Susan Newell
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Terry,

This is a good one. I suppose we all try to weigh our failures against our successes, bad acts vs. benevolent one, etc. i liked the whole Final Jeopardy approach. It is cleverly written and entertaining with a wake-up call at the end. Good job.

Sue

Here is the category." Love pops up on a big screen. -- punctuation

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Sue, thank you for reading and for your review, and of course the edit...as usual. Woe is me. Terry.
reply by Susan Newell on 09-Oct-2022
    No woe! Just what happens to ALL writers.
Comment from jessizero
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I really enjoyed this one! I was feeling very nervous for Kevin. I was relieved at the end...or should I not have been? Either way, thanks for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Jessi, thank you for reading my story. And you too asked a great question! Terry.
Comment from Sarah Robin
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You have a great imagination! I enjoyed reading this story. It made me smile! I loved watching Jeopardy, but I am not as quick with answers since I have aged. Thanks for a good read.

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2022


reply by the author on 09-Oct-2022
    Sarah, thank you for reading, I am pleased you enjoyed the story. Terry.