Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Summer sizzle"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from leather
That's a great question. We are slowly cooking ourselves to death. Glad I don't have another 50 years to live. Thanks for the unusual and timely topic.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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That's a great question. We are slowly cooking ourselves to death. Glad I don't have another 50 years to live. Thanks for the unusual and timely topic.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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the countries worldwide must all, all join in our we will be sunk!
Comment from Mark D. R.
JLR,
One easily feels the sizzle in your road trip. Your yellow-colored illustration adds to that hot sun 'feel.' Minor format suggestion is to uncap your 'In' in your middle line of your Cinquain poem. IMHO It breaks your flow from the first two lines.
Mark
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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JLR,
One easily feels the sizzle in your road trip. Your yellow-colored illustration adds to that hot sun 'feel.' Minor format suggestion is to uncap your 'In' in your middle line of your Cinquain poem. IMHO It breaks your flow from the first two lines.
Mark
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Mark good catch didn?t see that.
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Nice work! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is interesting and entertaining to read. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. I like it. Nice work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Man has done a number on this earth. All the pollution is coming full circle. And what goes up into the atmosphere must come down. And it is happening. Garbage is returning to haunt earth. It has been circulating in space, and now it shows its fate. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Man has done a number on this earth. All the pollution is coming full circle. And what goes up into the atmosphere must come down. And it is happening. Garbage is returning to haunt earth. It has been circulating in space, and now it shows its fate. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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👍
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Have a great weekend.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice summer poem to celebrate the hot humid days of the summer season which seems to be getting hotter every year due to climate changes and its impact.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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nice summer poem to celebrate the hot humid days of the summer season which seems to be getting hotter every year due to climate changes and its impact.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks Jake!
Comment from harmony13
Great artwork! This fits perfect with the theme of these words. It is also
very hot here in Florida 100 earlier in the day today. The poem flows
and connects well. The author's question "What for?" I have no idea -
yet I do know so much the environment is changing. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Great artwork! This fits perfect with the theme of these words. It is also
very hot here in Florida 100 earlier in the day today. The poem flows
and connects well. The author's question "What for?" I have no idea -
yet I do know so much the environment is changing. Great Poem!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks that is exactly where I was headed I this heat wave. Too funny!
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. That is a good question, "What for?" It was probably cooler in the mountains. But then at the shore, one could go in the water and cool off. Best wishes in the cinquain contest.
FYI: your description you have "Quantrian" and in the notes you have 'quatrain' but this is clearly a cinquain.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Lol. That is a good question, "What for?" It was probably cooler in the mountains. But then at the shore, one could go in the water and cool off. Best wishes in the cinquain contest.
FYI: your description you have "Quantrian" and in the notes you have 'quatrain' but this is clearly a cinquain.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Too funny, I have quatrain blasting through my head as a I am taking a class from Jim Bartlett.
Comment from Teri7
That is a very good Chinquapin poem you have penned that is very true for us in Tennessee too! You used very good words and very good imagery. It makes me think of a lot of hot sun! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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That is a very good Chinquapin poem you have penned that is very true for us in Tennessee too! You used very good words and very good imagery. It makes me think of a lot of hot sun! Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2022
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Thanks Teri.
Comment from mermaids
Sounds like the temperature was quite high on this road trip. You have a smooth flow of lines and rhyming of words. You also have a strong steady beat. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Sounds like the temperature was quite high on this road trip. You have a smooth flow of lines and rhyming of words. You also have a strong steady beat. Excellent poetic form and use of words.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This made me smile. I would guess the answer is that someone in your house likes the shore better than the mountains--and it isn't you. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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This made me smile. I would guess the answer is that someone in your house likes the shore better than the mountains--and it isn't you. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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So true! Thanks for the good wishes.