Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Spring Splashes"Musings of an old man - 2022
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Comment from Frances Jean
What a delightful picture to accompany your poem. It is indeed a kaleidoscope of colour and you have painted your own with vivid description and some nice alliteration. Well done and thanks for sharing. Franky
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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What a delightful picture to accompany your poem. It is indeed a kaleidoscope of colour and you have painted your own with vivid description and some nice alliteration. Well done and thanks for sharing. Franky
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Franky, thank you!
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is a lovely picture to go with the piece. It helps the reader picture spring in their minds. You also associate the season with the upcoming holiday.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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That is a lovely picture to go with the piece. It helps the reader picture spring in their minds. You also associate the season with the upcoming holiday.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Mia, thank you!
Comment from mermaids
Your words create a painting of nature that comes alive. "Droplets of raindrops dancing on petals", make nature as a live character that awakens as Easter arrives. Excellent 5-7-5 form that takes the reader out into nature.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Your words create a painting of nature that comes alive. "Droplets of raindrops dancing on petals", make nature as a live character that awakens as Easter arrives. Excellent 5-7-5 form that takes the reader out into nature.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Mermaids, I value your comments.
Comment from Pangalactic
Oh the beauty of spring. The tulip bulbs are starting to push where I live in West Canada. We need the color ever so badly to offset the greyness of the current world condition.
You've painted a lovely mental landscape.
Great job :)
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Oh the beauty of spring. The tulip bulbs are starting to push where I live in West Canada. We need the color ever so badly to offset the greyness of the current world condition.
You've painted a lovely mental landscape.
Great job :)
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Shirley McLain
You painted a beautiful picture in my mind with your words. We have icy cold winds today, and this touch of spring was pleasure. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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You painted a beautiful picture in my mind with your words. We have icy cold winds today, and this touch of spring was pleasure. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Shirley, thanks for your comments, yes we are in the grips of winter today!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Yes, spring is alive with all the beautiful colors and rebirth of life. You captured that in this poem.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoyed reading. Yes, spring is alive with all the beautiful colors and rebirth of life. You captured that in this poem.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Barbara, thank you for your review.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you have two votes now!
It's not easy to write something fresh about Spring.
I live your opening verse , it's delight and different.
The third verse about the raindrops on the petals .. I still now love going outside just after it has rained and licking the raindrops from the leaves .. I knows it nutty but I adore doing it.
Ciao!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Ciao mystery poet, you have two votes now!
It's not easy to write something fresh about Spring.
I live your opening verse , it's delight and different.
The third verse about the raindrops on the petals .. I still now love going outside just after it has rained and licking the raindrops from the leaves .. I knows it nutty but I adore doing it.
Ciao!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your vote...
Comment from in777wr#
This was a well written poem. The poem flows well,and the message is clear. The writing prompt was followed well. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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This was a well written poem. The poem flows well,and the message is clear. The writing prompt was followed well. The picture you chose compliments this poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you!
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer!
A splendid stacked 5/7/5 poetic offering!
You have captured the excitement and beauty of spring as Easter approaches.
I, too, am so looking forward to warmer temperatures and the beauties of the season!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Hello, Mystery Writer!
A splendid stacked 5/7/5 poetic offering!
You have captured the excitement and beauty of spring as Easter approaches.
I, too, am so looking forward to warmer temperatures and the beauties of the season!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you Diane, yes old man winter still has a migthy grip on us in some parts of the country..
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i liked this variation of the haiku format. I learned about another one today, the Haiku sonnet which is four 5-75 stanzas followed by a couple to make 14 lines total. this would nicely fit that format as well with a few minor tweeks.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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i liked this variation of the haiku format. I learned about another one today, the Haiku sonnet which is four 5-75 stanzas followed by a couple to make 14 lines total. this would nicely fit that format as well with a few minor tweeks.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thanks, Jake, I love well-crafted Haiku, very difficult.