Mr Burger
Charlie Entry11 total reviews
Comment from James Ott
The commission to write a story starting with "The Last time I saw Charlie..." is a challenge. What I see is imaginative and interesting. One wonders why Charlie with such a disability would take over the chore of cooking. Still, there is a lot of good here. I only wish the story were longer and perhaps more detailed.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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The commission to write a story starting with "The Last time I saw Charlie..." is a challenge. What I see is imaginative and interesting. One wonders why Charlie with such a disability would take over the chore of cooking. Still, there is a lot of good here. I only wish the story were longer and perhaps more detailed.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thanks very much for your review.