How could he ... ?
I will never understand ...28 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful entry for the Supernatural Fiction Story writing prompt contest. Good form fulfils the contest requirements. The plot is easy to follow and engaging. Good character development.
My grandson is 4, I would lose my mind if something like this happened to him. I like the ending twist. A golden retriever angel.
Well done, good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Wonderful entry for the Supernatural Fiction Story writing prompt contest. Good form fulfils the contest requirements. The plot is easy to follow and engaging. Good character development.
My grandson is 4, I would lose my mind if something like this happened to him. I like the ending twist. A golden retriever angel.
Well done, good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much for your lovely words. I too would be beside myself if any such thing happened to any of my grandchildren. I greatly appreciate your encouraging words and good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear writer,
I read your supernatural fiction piece and enjoyed it immensely. You wrote creatively while keeping your audience engaged. Very good job. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Dear writer,
I read your supernatural fiction piece and enjoyed it immensely. You wrote creatively while keeping your audience engaged. Very good job. Best wishes in the contest.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you Darlene - such very encouraging words and lovely good wishes, all greatly appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Annmuma
What a great contest entry! The story grabs the reader at the first and one cannot quit until we know who is Gary. I love it and it certainly fits every contest rule. Good luck. ann
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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What a great contest entry! The story grabs the reader at the first and one cannot quit until we know who is Gary. I love it and it certainly fits every contest rule. Good luck. ann
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you so very much! I am so glad you enjoyed it and were fully engaged to the end. That's so encouraging. Thank you too for your good wishes.
Wendy
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a beautiful story, Wendy. It seemed so real and quite believable when I was reading it, and I was very relieved when little Shara was found. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This is a beautiful story, Wendy. It seemed so real and quite believable when I was reading it, and I was very relieved when little Shara was found. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you Judy! What a lovely review! Thank you too for your good wishes. Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from royowen
This is different Wendy, there's nothing like a faithful dog, even a talking dog, of course I thought it was a an Angel, but they don't usually come with names. This is beautiful Wendy, you believe in the souls of animals. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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This is different Wendy, there's nothing like a faithful dog, even a talking dog, of course I thought it was a an Angel, but they don't usually come with names. This is beautiful Wendy, you believe in the souls of animals. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you Roy. I know God can use animals and He even makes them speak at times, for His purposes. I am very glad you enjoyed my story.
Wendy
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Well done
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Of course, Balaam?s donkey
Comment from Terry Broxson
I love this story. I think it could be hard to beat in the contest, good luck.
I knew you were going for a ghost, but the twist to a dog, that is brilliant! A golden retriever no less. Outstanding work!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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I love this story. I think it could be hard to beat in the contest, good luck.
I knew you were going for a ghost, but the twist to a dog, that is brilliant! A golden retriever no less. Outstanding work!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Hi Terry,
Thank you so much for your super review and good wishes, and it makes me very happy that you enjoyed my story. I appreciate very much the honour of an exceptional rating and six stars also.
Wendy
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I think you did a very good job with this piece. The pacing is good and there's a lot of tension generated quite quickly in the proceedings. It's a nice conclusion of sorts too.
Nice one
G
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Hi there,
I think you did a very good job with this piece. The pacing is good and there's a lot of tension generated quite quickly in the proceedings. It's a nice conclusion of sorts too.
Nice one
G
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much - I appreciate your words and your kind review!
Wendy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. Yes, supernatural does happen. I honestly believe they are part of God's plan. I enjoyed reading this lovely story.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. Yes, supernatural does happen. I honestly believe they are part of God's plan. I enjoyed reading this lovely story.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Barbara for your super review.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, How Could He?, tells the supernatural story of the small child kept out of harm's way by a friendly ghost dog with communication abilities coming in handy. Good dog.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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This story, How Could He?, tells the supernatural story of the small child kept out of harm's way by a friendly ghost dog with communication abilities coming in handy. Good dog.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thanks Bill. Super review, and I appreciate it.
Wendy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That sent goosebumps all up my arms and neck. I do believe in things like that happening, no one knows for sure what happens when we die. We know we'll follow Jesus, but what else is possible? I loved this story, it's a great contest entry and I wish you the best of luck! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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That sent goosebumps all up my arms and neck. I do believe in things like that happening, no one knows for sure what happens when we die. We know we'll follow Jesus, but what else is possible? I loved this story, it's a great contest entry and I wish you the best of luck! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Sandra! Love your review. Yes, the world beyond life on earth is not even imaginable ... and God could easily use a loved dog in a supernatural way if He chose to. I appreciate your review and also your good wishes.
Wendy