George
a prince of a horse111 total reviews
Comment from HeavenlyDreads
OMG! I can't believe I just cried;I felt like I knew George. Well done! You communicated both the human and animal components of this story very well. Great choice for the artwork too. The artwork actually made me click your story. Belgrano's use of color is awesome and it's a beautiful tribute to George. :)
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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OMG! I can't believe I just cried;I felt like I knew George. Well done! You communicated both the human and animal components of this story very well. Great choice for the artwork too. The artwork actually made me click your story. Belgrano's use of color is awesome and it's a beautiful tribute to George. :)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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I love Belgrano's work and feel grateful that I found this picture to accompany George's story - thank you for sharing that! And thank you, also, for this exceptionally wonderful review, HD. I'm honored! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Spitfire
What a beautiful tribute to George: a celebration before euthanizing. I love that he remained "statue-still" while the children took turns on his back. You make him sound so regal. A truly unique image at the end with Patches standing guard.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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What a beautiful tribute to George: a celebration before euthanizing. I love that he remained "statue-still" while the children took turns on his back. You make him sound so regal. A truly unique image at the end with Patches standing guard.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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A great word for exactly how I felt about George, that he was regal. I'm grateful for your wonderful review, Spitfire, and appreciate the time you took to stop by and read. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Hi Writingfundimension
A very movingly written piece, a fine tribute to a remarkable animal. I am often struck by how animals can affect and influence our lives. I think we are all enriched by encounters such as this.
Patrick
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Hi Writingfundimension
A very movingly written piece, a fine tribute to a remarkable animal. I am often struck by how animals can affect and influence our lives. I think we are all enriched by encounters such as this.
Patrick
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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I so agree, Patrick. This took place quite a few years ago and I still recall that look in George's eyes. Thank you very much for your excellent review and insights. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from axelbeariter
She, then, spoke of how George had been the only unconditionally loving man she'd ever known./That's particularly telling.----Patches knickered in the distance, and for days afterwards refused to eat./I had no idea horses could display human feelings like that.----This was a sad, but particularly well written account of a special horse. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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She, then, spoke of how George had been the only unconditionally loving man she'd ever known./That's particularly telling.----Patches knickered in the distance, and for days afterwards refused to eat./I had no idea horses could display human feelings like that.----This was a sad, but particularly well written account of a special horse. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Thank you, axel. I really appreciate your awesome review and insights. Thanks much for stopping by. Warm regards, Bev
Comment from OrangeZombies
This is a very nice story, it's soft and sweet. It allows the reader to get to know the characters more than expected in such a short piece, and so much was said and it was sad simply providing a feleling of simple and true love and friendship that allows the reader to feel even more complex feelings. Good Job!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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This is a very nice story, it's soft and sweet. It allows the reader to get to know the characters more than expected in such a short piece, and so much was said and it was sad simply providing a feleling of simple and true love and friendship that allows the reader to feel even more complex feelings. Good Job!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for your excellent review. I appreciate you stopping by to read! Bev
Comment from Paradox Tremors
I understand your friend's pain and the heartache she endured, the bravery, and love she showed George there at the end. He was more than just a pet. He was a part of the family, her family. It's not easy letting go. We had to put "Ace"--our "mutt" of a dog--down as well. We did it because we loved him. We hated to see him in the constant pain he endured, and would have endured simply because he loved us just as much. May both of their souls rest in peace. Thank-you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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I understand your friend's pain and the heartache she endured, the bravery, and love she showed George there at the end. He was more than just a pet. He was a part of the family, her family. It's not easy letting go. We had to put "Ace"--our "mutt" of a dog--down as well. We did it because we loved him. We hated to see him in the constant pain he endured, and would have endured simply because he loved us just as much. May both of their souls rest in peace. Thank-you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Hi, PT. Thank you for your wonderful, supportive review. I'm sorry for the sad experience of losing Ace. I know the experience is one that you'll never forget. And you were kind to let Ace pass on with dignity. I have a client that keeps her fifteen year dog old alive - with the help of the veterinarian - because she can't stand the thought of how bad she'll feel when he's gone. It rather sickends me, frankly. Be well, Bev
Comment from Connie C
I simply love this, Bev. I am such an animal lover and was so touched by your story. I just saw the movie, War Horse, and the relationship between George and Patches reminded me of the relationship between two horses in the movie. You have told this story beautifully, my friend. I felt like I was there at the wake too; that's how good your use of description is. And the very first sentence of the story really drew me in. You should continue to pursue your writing of stories, whether non-fiction or fiction, as you have a real knack for writing them. And, of course, don't forget to continue with your poetry too! I hope you get lots of sixes for this; it is so deserving. Wish I had one left for you, and I'm not just saying that because you are quickly becoming one of my favorites on this site either. Connie xoxoxo
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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I simply love this, Bev. I am such an animal lover and was so touched by your story. I just saw the movie, War Horse, and the relationship between George and Patches reminded me of the relationship between two horses in the movie. You have told this story beautifully, my friend. I felt like I was there at the wake too; that's how good your use of description is. And the very first sentence of the story really drew me in. You should continue to pursue your writing of stories, whether non-fiction or fiction, as you have a real knack for writing them. And, of course, don't forget to continue with your poetry too! I hope you get lots of sixes for this; it is so deserving. Wish I had one left for you, and I'm not just saying that because you are quickly becoming one of my favorites on this site either. Connie xoxoxo
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Wow, thank you so much, Connie. What a gracious and supportive review. I thank you for your words here and the uplifting of my heart as a result. I'm going to continue more of this type of writing this year. I like the novels, but maybe short stories are more my forte. I actually got to thinking more about that after reading an interview with a writer in Writer's Digest who found that short stories were his niche. I promise to write some poetry, too LOL. I can't thank you enough for your beautiful support, my friend. Hugs, Bev
Comment from purrfect tale
A very touching story. You related these events in a clear and compelling manner. I felt I was there at George's final good-bye party.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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A very touching story. You related these events in a clear and compelling manner. I felt I was there at George's final good-bye party.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Mission accomplished LOL. Thanks so much for your awesome review, purrfect tale. You're most kind to take time to read about George. Blessings, Bev
Comment from ATHWebber
Just beautiful. It is some kind of cruel joke that we have to out last our animal friends. This is a wonderfully crafted and respectful window on the last hours of the big guy's life. I wish I too had known George.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Just beautiful. It is some kind of cruel joke that we have to out last our animal friends. This is a wonderfully crafted and respectful window on the last hours of the big guy's life. I wish I too had known George.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, ATH. I wish that I had known George longer than just one day. Though I'd heard about him from Catherine, being in his presence was a truly amazing experience. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Roberta Joan Jensen
What an awesome way to say good-bye to an old friend. Kids sometimes have funerals for their pets after they die, but this is the first time I've ever heard of anyone having a wake while a pet was still alive.
Roberta
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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What an awesome way to say good-bye to an old friend. Kids sometimes have funerals for their pets after they die, but this is the first time I've ever heard of anyone having a wake while a pet was still alive.
Roberta
Comment Written 05-Jan-2012
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2012
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I think Catherine is a special soul for even thinking of such a gesture for her horse. Thanks for sharing that thought with me and for your excellent review. Kindest regards, Bev